Spouse

Love, laughter and learning The one with whom you can agree to disagree Sweet yearning Partners for life Loving each other is the key Man-wife Transcend from me to we Blend Love, laughter and learning A li'l adjustment is the key Blend Form: Minichu (Aba cBc dbD ABD) Syllables: 6.12.3 4.8.2 2.4.1 6.8.1

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/7/2024 9:46:00 AM

Beautifully written Jo! So sweet. "...Transcend / from me to we / Blend..." - so romantic. Congratulations! :)

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/31/2024 5:54:00 AM

Awesome write enjoyed reading your work we indeed many blessings

Valsa George

Date: 3/25/2024 9:09:00 PM

Remarkable dear Joanna !"Transcend from me to we/ Blend" Indeed, this is the key to a successful relationship!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/24/2024 8:19:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spouse" write. This would make a nice card. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day.....................

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2024 4:11:00 AM

Dear joanna, you did your minichu really well. I absolutely love the flow and depth of what you’ve conveyed and how effortlessly you’ve rhymed too here, brilliant. Surely a top winner. Best of luck

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/20/2024 4:32:00 PM

outstanding Minichu. You've inspired me to try writing one. I enjoyed the brevity done with a purpose...Blend is the operative word for marriage. Well said. Best wishes with the contest, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2024 11:03:00 AM

If it's to form, it's looking great, Joanna.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/20/2024 7:05:00 AM

Dear Joanna, You have eloquently captured the essence of partnership—the blend of love, laughter, and lifelong learning. I love how your words speak to the sweet yearning and journey of transcending from "me" to "we." Joanna, you have shown us the beauty found in the union of hearts. - Blessings, my friend, - Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/20/2024 6:34:00 AM

Such beautiful sentiments you convey, Joanna.-- Partners for life Loving each other is the key Man-wife--Well delivered this ode to spouse.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/20/2024 5:46:00 AM

So true. Just passed the thirty years mark for us. We virtually never argue. Nice rhymes