Spouse

Love, laughter and learning
The one with whom you can agree to disagree
Sweet yearning

Partners for life
Loving each other is the key
Man-wife

Transcend
from me to we
Blend

Love, laughter and learning
A li'l adjustment is the key
Blend



Form: Minichu (Aba cBc dbD ABD) 
Syllables: 6.12.3 4.8.2 2.4.1 6.8.1

husbandwiferhyme

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Linda Alice Fowler

April 7, 2024 at 9:46 AM

Beautifully written Jo! So sweet. "...Transcend / from me to we / Blend..." - so romantic. Congratulations! :)

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen

March 31, 2024 at 5:54 AM

Awesome write enjoyed reading your work we indeed many blessings

Valsa George

March 25, 2024 at 9:09 PM

Remarkable dear Joanna !"Transcend from me to we/ Blend" Indeed, this is the key to a successful relationship!

Paula Goldsmith

March 24, 2024 at 8:19 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spouse" write. This would make a nice card. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day.....................

Ink Empress

March 22, 2024 at 4:11 AM

Dear joanna, you did your minichu really well. I absolutely love the flow and depth of what you’ve conveyed and how effortlessly you’ve rhymed too here, brilliant. Surely a top winner. Best of luck

Andrea Dietrich

March 20, 2024 at 11:03 AM

If it's to form, it's looking great, Joanna.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 20, 2024 at 7:05 AM

Dear Joanna, You have eloquently captured the essence of partnership—the blend of love, laughter, and lifelong learning. I love how your words speak to the sweet yearning and journey of transcending from "me" to "we." Joanna, you have shown us the beauty found in the union of hearts. - Blessings, my friend, - Daniel