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Spouse

Love, laughter and learning
The one with whom you can agree to disagree
Sweet yearning

Partners for life
Loving each other is the key
Man-wife

Transcend
from me to we
Blend

Love, laughter and learning
A li'l adjustment is the key
Blend



Form: Minichu (Aba cBc dbD ABD) 
Syllables: 6.12.3 4.8.2 2.4.1 6.8.1

Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2024

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Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/7/2024 9:46:00 AM Beautifully written Jo! So sweet. "...Transcend / from me to we / Blend..." - so romantic. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 3/31/2024 5:54:00 AM Awesome write enjoyed reading your work we indeed many blessings Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/25/2024 9:09:00 PM Remarkable dear Joanna !"Transcend from me to we/ Blend" Indeed, this is the key to a successful relationship! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/24/2024 8:19:00 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely "Spouse" write. This would make a nice card. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day..................... Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 3/22/2024 4:11:00 AM Dear joanna, you did your minichu really well. I absolutely love the flow and depth of what you’ve conveyed and how effortlessly you’ve rhymed too here, brilliant. Surely a top winner. Best of luck Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/20/2024 11:03:00 AM If it's to form, it's looking great, Joanna. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/20/2024 7:05:00 AM Dear Joanna, You have eloquently captured the essence of partnership—the blend of love, laughter, and lifelong learning. I love how your words speak to the sweet yearning and journey of transcending from "me" to "we." Joanna, you have shown us the beauty found in the union of hearts. - Blessings, my friend, - Daniel Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/20/2024 6:34:00 AM Such beautiful sentiments you convey, Joanna.-- Partners for life Loving each other is the key Man-wife--Well delivered this ode to spouse. Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 3/20/2024 5:46:00 AM So true. Just passed the thirty years mark for us. We virtually never argue. Nice rhymes Login to Reply