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The spotless swaps are filled with bright hemlocks Slaloms brighten the looming metal fence Footsteps ring in the darkness of airlocks The spotless swaps are filled with bright hemlocks Under a load of plants, gates groan and shock A moment when nothing pleased your senses The spotless swaps are filled with bright hemlocks Slaloms brighten the looming metal fence.
Written: March 22, 2023

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Date: 3/24/2023 12:36:00 PM
Quite a picture here, Sotto
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Date: 3/24/2023 3:09:00 AM
So intriguing Sotto!
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Date: 3/23/2023 10:59:00 AM
Brilliant triolet.
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Date: 3/23/2023 9:50:00 AM
Your poetry of hemlocks would bring...Socrates back to life, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Very beautiful! God bless you!
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Date: 3/22/2023 8:43:00 PM
Very nicely penned Sotto, best wishes
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Date: 3/22/2023 7:45:00 PM
Wow, , love this , such a great form of poetry, blessings to you for sharing your amazing gift with us all
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