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Spooning With Parched Palms

SPOONING WITH PARCHED PALMS a banquet of butterflies flutter ~ by her seaswept hair so bonnie. ~ sunshine and freckles fly free from the sky, ~ illuminating blue eyes, ~ dotting her suntanned skin. ~ a sailboat serenely knocks against the chiseled shore. ~ tartan cloth passionately charmed with cheese and wine. ~ pink blushing beach, a twinkle in his smile wants more. ~ his teeth bright as teeming waves of love’s moon shine. ~ picnic at full thrust ~ naked footprints rake through sand ~ soft music spellbound ~ chantilly lips on blitzed neck ~ seaside spooning with parched palms ~ 4/4/2018 It’s All About Four/Sponsor: Broken Wings Crystalline, Kimo, Quatrain, Tanka forms

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2018 8:28:00 PM

Sensual and beautiful great imagery, Kim {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2018 8:31:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/30/2018 7:19:00 AM

The warmth of summer comes blazing through this marvelous piece. Congrats on a big win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thanks so much, Phil! <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 5:50:00 PM

It is obvious how this one scored so high. I knew first time I saw it that it was a winner. Congrats, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 6:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Jean Murray

Date: 4/29/2018 5:17:00 PM

I like it! Nothing like some seaside spooning Kim. Congratulations on your placement.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thanks, Jean! ;)

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/29/2018 4:27:00 PM

Lovely romantic imagery, Kim! Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 4:35:00 PM

Thanks, my friend!

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2018 8:47:00 AM

Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this perfectly lovely and dreamy poem. Well done !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thanks so much, Constance! <3

James Inman

Date: 4/29/2018 8:01:00 AM

Kim, nice to see a different take on the contest. Your words create a wonderful painting in my mind.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 1:11:00 PM

Thank you, James! :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/29/2018 1:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading, smooth flow from one form to another. A beautiful poem with awesome imagery also. Well done. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Susan!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/29/2018 1:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim on your win with such a beautiful poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/28/2018 10:30:00 PM

Congrats on your top win with this beautiful poem, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2018 5:38:00 PM

Wow, sexy and beautiful at the same time. I love what you did with that challenge, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2018 5:33:00 PM

Such sizzling imagery Kim!!!!! makes me want to pack my picnic hamper and get to the beach... but the weather isn't that kind lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2018 5:57:00 PM

LOL...thanks for making me smile! Thanks!