Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Spooning With Parched Palms

SPOONING WITH PARCHED PALMS

a banquet of butterflies flutter ~
    by her seaswept hair so bonnie. ~

sunshine and freckles fly free from the sky, ~
     illuminating blue eyes, ~
        dotting her suntanned skin. ~

a sailboat serenely knocks against the chiseled shore. ~
   tartan cloth passionately charmed with cheese and wine. ~
pink blushing beach, a twinkle in his smile wants more. ~
   his teeth bright as teeming waves of love’s moon shine. ~

picnic at full thrust ~
    naked footprints rake through sand ~
         soft music spellbound ~
            chantilly lips on blitzed neck ~
               seaside spooning with parched palms ~

4/4/2018

It’s All About Four/Sponsor: Broken Wings
Crystalline, Kimo, Quatrain, Tanka forms

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Eve Roper May 1, 2018 at 8:28 PM Sensual and beautiful great imagery, Kim {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2018 at 8:31 PM Thank you, Eve!

Phil Capitano April 30, 2018 at 7:19 AM The warmth of summer comes blazing through this marvelous piece. Congrats on a big win. Kim Rodrigues April 30, 2018 at 7:32 AM Thanks so much, Phil! <3

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2018 at 5:50 PM It is obvious how this one scored so high. I knew first time I saw it that it was a winner. Congrats, Kim Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 6:01 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 5:17 PM I like it! Nothing like some seaside spooning Kim. Congratulations on your placement. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 6:03 PM Thanks, Jean! ;)

Sandra Haight April 29, 2018 at 4:27 PM Lovely romantic imagery, Kim! Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 4:35 PM Thanks, my friend!

Constance La France April 29, 2018 at 8:47 AM Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this perfectly lovely and dreamy poem. Well done ! Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 1:12 PM Thanks so much, Constance! <3

James Inman April 29, 2018 at 8:01 AM Kim, nice to see a different take on the contest. Your words create a wonderful painting in my mind. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 1:11 PM Thank you, James! :)

Susan Gentry April 29, 2018 at 1:57 AM Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading, smooth flow from one form to another. A beautiful poem with awesome imagery also. Well done. :) Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 5:40 AM Thank you, Susan!

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 29, 2018 at 1:06 AM Congratulations, Kim on your win with such a beautiful poem. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 5:39 AM Thank you, Subimal!

Line Gauthier April 28, 2018 at 10:30 PM Congrats on your top win with this beautiful poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 5:39 AM Thank you, Line!

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2018 at 5:38 PM Wow, sexy and beautiful at the same time. I love what you did with that challenge, Kim. Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 5:56 PM Thanks, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Jan Allison April 5, 2018 at 5:33 PM Such sizzling imagery Kim!!!!! makes me want to pack my picnic hamper and get to the beach... but the weather isn't that kind lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 5:57 PM LOL...thanks for making me smile! Thanks!

Janice Canerdy April 5, 2018 at 7:55 AM WOW! So well-done, Kim! Janice Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 7:56 AM Thanks, Janice :)

Kai Michael Neumann April 5, 2018 at 3:06 AM Parched palms and picnic at full thrust. I like that. Kai Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 7:35 AM Thanks, Kai!

Tom Cunningham April 5, 2018 at 2:29 AM Beautiful image you have created Kim. Unfortunately those picnic days are a long way off here in the Uk. Good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 7:37 AM The temperature has dropped once again! Winter wants to cling here too! Thanks, Tom!

Caren Krutsinger April 5, 2018 at 12:30 AM The imagery! The meter! The cadence! The poetress has truly outdone herself, and now I have to.....run and take my shower. Full thrust. Indeed! Kim Rodrigues April 5, 2018 at 7:37 AM LOL! Thanks, Caren!

Frederic Parker April 4, 2018 at 9:22 PM sounds like a very joyous day with a loved one...good luck in the contest Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2018 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Frederic!