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Spooky Experience

Gripped by dark flames inside bottomless pit groping for exit, eerie worms they hit… bombarded with screaming wails midst teeth grit tortured souls stared at me through screen, unlit--- By such virtual experience, I dread hell* more so since Scriptures explicitly tell... grateful to God for pardon from sins’ swell His love reached me out so there I won’t dwell.
*Revelation 20:14 And death and hell were cast into the lake of fire. This is the second death. October 30, 2020 4th place, "8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme" Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 11/5/2020.

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Date: 11/11/2020 12:35:00 PM
I totally agree Beata! I am wrapped in gratitude for our Savior's love and sacrifice. I once heard a pastor say he would like to set up the "last chance mission" outside the gates of hell to pray for those about to enter to ask for forgiveness. It is an intriguing picture - one I think of often. Blessings and hugs my friend!
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Date: 11/6/2020 11:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest - Have a lovely weekend, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/6/2020 10:50:00 AM
Beata, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Date: 11/5/2020 2:11:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
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Date: 10/30/2020 3:30:00 AM
There is no fear when you believe in God... God bless you for your faith and strength...
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