Spooky Experience
Gripped by dark flames inside bottomless pit
groping for exit, eerie worms they hit…
bombarded with screaming wails midst teeth grit
tortured souls stared at me through screen, unlit---
By such virtual experience, I dread hell*
more so since Scriptures explicitly tell...
grateful to God for pardon from sins’ swell
His love reached me out so there I won’t dwell.
*Revelation 20:14 And death and hell were cast into the lake of fire. This is the second death.
October 30, 2020
4th place, "8 Lines of Spooky Rhyme" Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 11/5/2020.
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