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What we felt was spontaneous feelings easy to navigate, other thoughts were extraneous fixation or not love won't wait. Lost in the portal of our eyes what we felt was spontaneous, as tangible as starry skies its intrigue consentaneous. Doubts were but momentaneous for we'd shared a revelation, what we felt was spontaneous our hearts needed no translation. There was no need to verbalize sweet words were miscellaneous we had no wish to patronize what we felt was spontaneous. (Quatern) 01/20/2020 Eight word challenge 1 2020 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 1/31/2020 2:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win win!;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/31/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/31/2020 12:48:00 PM
What a nice write Emile, congrats on another fine win! I especially enjoyed the repeating refrain!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/31/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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