Emile Pinet Poet Quatern

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Spontaneous

What we felt was spontaneous
feelings easy to navigate,
other thoughts were extraneous
fixation or not love won't wait.

Lost in the portal of our eyes 
what we felt was spontaneous,
as tangible as starry skies
its intrigue consentaneous.

Doubts were but momentaneous
for we'd shared a revelation,
what we felt was spontaneous
our hearts needed no translation.

There was no need to verbalize
sweet words were miscellaneous
we had no wish to patronize
what we felt was spontaneous.


(Quatern)


01/20/2020
Eight word challenge 1 2020 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Brenda Chiri January 31, 2020 at 2:48 PM Congrats on your win win!;) Emile Pinet January 31, 2020 at 3:58 PM Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton January 31, 2020 at 12:48 PM What a nice write Emile, congrats on another fine win! I especially enjoyed the repeating refrain! Emile Pinet January 31, 2020 at 1:07 PM Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.