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Spontaneity

In love's spontaneous symphony, Notes of passion set hearts free. No script to follow, just melodies weave, A dance of emotions, in love, we believe. Music flows like a spontaneous stream, Each note, a sigh in a heartfelt dream. Feelings cascade in an unrestrained rhyme, In spontaneity, love transcends space and time. Nature's canvas, painted without a plan, Colors of spontaneity, across the span. Breezes whisper secrets, trees sway and play, In nature's spontaneity, serenity holds sway. Feelings bloom like wildflowers unseen, Spontaneity's touch, a vibrant sheen. Love, music, nature in harmony entwine, A celebration of life, where spontaneity shines.

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Date: 3/1/2024 10:04:00 PM
You have hit the nail on the head. In love, nature, and in emotions there should be vibrancy and spontaneity, the absence of which leaves these areas rigid and artificial. Apt entry for the contest. All the Best dear Jay.
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:37:00 AM
An awesome ode to love, Jay.-- No script to follow, just melodies weave, A dance of emotions, in love, we believe--love vibes resonate throughout!
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Date: 2/25/2024 5:35:00 PM
So lovely poetic view of spontaneity
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Date: 2/25/2024 1:16:00 PM
What a lovely melodic poem! I think you will do great in the contest! Good luck!
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:20:00 AM
So well well-crafted metaphoric poem about spontaneity, Jay. Your imagery as well as wording is so well conceived.
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