Written, February 24, 2024 For The Premiere Contest, “Spontaneity” Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker
3rd Place
A quoted warning tells us, “haste makes waste.” Perhaps not so- denied by nature's sway. Life spontaneity survives post-haste; on this, God-given souls likewise convey. Our inner selves are fashioned to express impulsiveness to grasp life and to share. No time to pause and study, then digress; must implement its joys with timely care. So, in-the-moment action follows through when partnered with the heart to lead the mind; as when a child gifts dandelions to you- picked quickly from the lawn with love assigned. And so, forethought oft kills that magic spell- which acts of spontaneity impel.
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