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its like pepper spraying the eyes and looking at it from a soul point of view 

Spoilt Humanity Moulded From Suffering

Darkness begins it's work hiding within shadows creep 
moving away from the light tortured nature divides
uneven inside this plague nothing makes something change path
culling knowledge by brainwashing the masses sense the guilt

Unreal acts out of bounds demanding human sacrifice
first it attacks the innocent made in the image of God
then it works it's way forward to the vulnerable bodies
spreading this virus worse than a plague showing no mercy

Consumed by hate weeding out souls in order of value
those whom are deemed worthless by this state control
when you cross the bones of Adam claiming supreme rights
a journey begins with rotten apples poisoned by the snake

Blind bats by their nature twisting with loveless acts corrupt
the dragon has opened his fiery mouth once again 
with destruction heartless beggars crush the poor 
we all know the truth and on which side of it we stand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Petersen Potter Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Hi Liam!:)) Very true, powerful poem, you've written,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Sadly,we're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted, dangerous,scary times.Book of Revelations unfolding right before us.But still we have God, Love Hope Peace Light Salvation thru Jesus!Lets pray for everyone, especially for all the blind, lost souls in this world!Your pens mighty golden!A fav!You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are ok thru all this.Remember the Lords always with you!Wishing you always the very best in everything you do.Please stay healthy n' safe, Liam!Be positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Please keep your faith in Jesus!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Trifiatis Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Those who have put economy over human life and dignity are going to pay a heavy price my brother Liam. An outstanding poem presenting reality in it's TRUE form. Wonderfully done . Blessings. Stay healthy!
Mcdaid Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:44 PM
so very true dear brother, we are paying the ferryman for neglecting our duties towards our fellow man, you know me pal the bullets are fired in words, thank you so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment, stay safe i will add you to my prayers
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:27 PM
As always, Liam, you sound your warnings brilliantly in service of issues you care about. The second stanza spells the essence of your write, though the entire poem resonates with intensity.
Mcdaid Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:38 PM
smiling Vijay i am sounding the alarm from my heart in pen, thank you deeply for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you always
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Truth can be, and in to many cases is, tragic. Brilliant write Liam...
Mcdaid Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 2:35 PM
thank you so much charlie, tragic is the demeaning of something that comes to justice smiling bless you
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