Spoilt For Choice

gaia on the run

beauty in shining armour

mother of all wars



02nd January 2020
Senryu on Mother contest
Sponsor Jenish Somadas
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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 3:19 PM
very creative one, Kai. Congrats on the win
Neumann Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 2:48 AM
Thank you. The earth keeps spinning whatever we do. So we might as well write poetry. Kind wishes, Kai
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 7:00 PM
oh, so beautiful, Kai, a mother that loves her children will put herself in front of evil before she allows her children to face. Congratulations on your win in Jenish' contest. Hugs Eve
Neumann Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 2:54 AM
Thank you Eve. We all come from a mother. Mine has passed many years ago, but the earth is still spinning. Kind wishes, Kai
Somadas Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 12:24 AM
A different one, beautifully expressed.. Congrats on your win..
Neumann Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Jenish. Kind wishes, Kai
Neumann Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:23 AM
Thank you. Off guard is how the subconscious mind works. In life and in poetry. Kind wishes, Kai
Faulkner Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 12:09 AM
Very clever and original, caught me off guard (in a good way)
Neumann Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:24 AM
Thanks a lot Michelle. Kind wishes, Kai
Thomas Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Ah an awesome spin on the topic! I almost did one on the earth; we think alike lol!
Neumann Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:21 AM
And then the world will keep on spinning ...
Dutta Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Great Idea. All the best. Happy New Year.
Neumann Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Thank you. We will see what the world stage brings, but we can only do our own little bit. Like writing poetry for example. Kind wishes, Kai
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