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Spoiler Alert Best Day Ever

As I’m walking along the bay, smelling fish, I see fishermen on the sidewalk, lining up at a particular restaurant. I would stop but my man wouldn't appreciate my lateness. Maybe I deserve a bite, but I don't enjoy his disapproval. I'm his woman. I hope he has a surprise for me. If he does, then go on, fish smell. I don't need to eat anymore As I live and breathe, there is my college nemesis Standing in front of me, less than six feet away. She is not ruining my birthday, or my surprise. I keep walking, avoiding her eyes, but my heart beats faster. I am a small-town girl, so not looking at someone is difficult. Neither of us speak. I do not even glance at her eyes. Peter is getting his little boat ready for our day voyage. “Now for your surprise," he announces. Already! I am amazed. I thought he would propose later, after we get to the island. Maybe at our favorite little restaurant. In the evening with the stars. My heart is doing a double time dance. “I have invited my cousin, Alexa,” he tells me. “She will be right back.” Alexa! Not Nemesis Alexa. I stare at him, my mouth wide open. “What is her last name?” I ask, my heart beating wildly. “Hello!” Someone I despise says in a singsong voice. I know my birthday is ruined before I turn and fake-smile.

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Date: 1/29/2019 6:25:00 PM
Ah.... too true-to-life! ;D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/29/2019 8:46:00 PM
And you know stuff like this happened to me daily right? Before I stopped being so "out there". Now that I am subtle and sedate, I have no worries. Would you like to buy a bridge in London?
Date: 1/28/2019 9:46:00 PM
The Nemesis, maybe here rotten fish! bad smell, the spoiler of best day!-
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/28/2019 11:01:00 PM
Yes, she certainly would have been! For sure!

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