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Old men who will leave this shattered earth ruined,youth will inherit their disaster Old men who preach morals while consuming devils carbon The children will suffer fear not the children shall conquer old ways

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2018 3:30:00 PM
prophetic it may be yet you give hope for the next generation... better DNAs from life's experiences, arthur... beautiful!...
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Date: 10/2/2018 12:05:00 PM
The youth have their place to teach us not to be too set in our ways
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Date: 10/2/2018 10:47:00 AM
Children will inherit the world, and the old shall perish, I enjoyed your thought provoking poem today Arthur
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Date: 10/2/2018 10:06:00 AM
A potent penning to mull in my mind for a while x
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Date: 10/2/2018 6:52:00 AM
Hope the ending of your poem has the power of prediction, Arthur..you are right..the children will find mending ways.
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