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Splitting Heart Ache

visions of you
romantic visions of just us two
can these visions be possibly true

dreams of you
wonderful dreams of just us two
are these dreams really really true

my heart is now black and blue
my heart was once for you
my heart is now broken

in two

heartbrokenmissing yourepetitionlight verse

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Casarah Nance

October 28, 2014 at 7:34 AM

Oh poor baby, black and blue heart, lets' make it red again.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 28, 2014 at 9:34 AM

I can think of something that can get it throbbing red again! :)

Maurice Yvonne

October 26, 2014 at 4:58 PM

ok I'm a fan really liking all your writes.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 26, 2014 at 5:14 PM

Thanks. I wish I could read more of everyone's poetry, but I'm always so busy writing my own. Sorry I haven't stopped by to comment on yours.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 26, 2014 at 6:21 AM

the title caught me.. "splitting heartache is somewhat so intense........" I like the soft way you first two stanzas.. like was establishing how it could have happen.. the third paragraph with your first line and the others is ok.. sad and tragic...but i want to read more of how that splitting is.. :) specifics..

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 26, 2014 at 6:48 AM

I would like to share the specifics but this is a fictional write. I'm glade you found it intriguing. I was just feeling a bit sad when writing this.

Charmaine Chircop

October 25, 2014 at 2:57 PM

This is so beautiful Seb..But the ending is so heartwrenchingly sad...Hope its fiction.My heart is now black and blue ..Almost like a cloaked universe waiting for a star.A favourite

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 26, 2014 at 3:47 AM

I hope it wasn't my doing that you changed your pic AGAIN! :) Thank you for your heart warming reply. I am still surprised that you even remember me.

Charmaine Chircop

October 25, 2014 at 6:14 PM

I consider all my friends special and you are one of my friends Seb.. You are surrounded by good friends here.You are not alone

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 25, 2014 at 3:24 PM

It's nice to see your beautiful painting, I mean avatar. :) I apologize for turning your heart black and blue, that was not my intention. Don't worry about me, I just a little down and it is a fictional write. You sure know how to make a person feel special.