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Split Wide Open

Split Wide Open The world of God’s miraculous, Imbedded deep with creation’s love, Split wide open With the lightning of grace Fragile shells of human bondage Cannot contain their foolishness, Nor feathers in the whirlwind Neither dandelion seeds Of crystal puffs - dizzy imbedded joy - Uncontrollable laughter explodes, On paths of effervescence, Yearns to burst through Frozen crusts of icy shame Freezing clods of unexplainable remorse, Floods in the wilderness of unworthiness, Little bits of serendipity, Untamed marvels – let loose - In mystical coincidence grow No fruitless plains, No impotent fertility, Wandering hearts harvest wonder In seeds redeemed from Eden’s scandal, Shattered pieces of providence’ paradise, A universe split wide open, Plans and diagrams dissolve in astonishment When eternal compassion bewilders logarithms Astounds in surprises to marvel At the fertile unbound universe When two weary unsuspecting paths Link outside astral planes And touch the fingertip of brimming joy! 6-11-22 Contest: This or That Contest Title: Split Wide Open Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 7/4/2022 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on such a beautiful poem.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris! Edward's themes are amazing opportunities to explore new worlds! Sending all the blessings of God's miraculous!
Date: 7/2/2022 9:13:00 PM
I am so full of admiration for your abilities as a poet. How God's saving grace 'floods in the wilderness of unworthiness...and eternal compassion bewilders logarithms'.... ! Deep and profound, dear Sam! Congratulations on your first place win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 11:15:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, your message and words bring such joy to my heart! Thank you many times over! Your amazing work inspires me. How blessed am I to have a companion on the journey with whom to share the joys, and challenges, of writing! Your congratulations bring such joy to me. Thank you! Sending you blessings of God's miraculous dear friend!
Date: 7/2/2022 5:01:00 PM
Excellent piece, Sam:-) Such depth, imagery and intelligence! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest;
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 11:09:00 AM
Edward, I am yet again humbled, honored, by your placement among so many thought full, excellent poems! Have said this many times over but your contest themes always bring to the surface so many quality poems! What a gift you are! Thank you for your challenge to reach higher and dig deeper! Sending you blessings of our miraculous God split wide open! Hope you had a wonderful 4th! Ours was filled with many happy activities!
Date: 7/2/2022 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 11:04:00 AM
Paula, dear friend, many thanks and much gratitude for your congratulations. Thank you for sharing in the world of God's miraculous! Sending you many blessings! Hope you had a wonderful 4th!
Date: 7/2/2022 7:39:00 AM
Sam, you deserve congratulations on your excellent win. You penned such a stunning Poem. Have a lovely weekend.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 11:01:00 AM
Lasaad, your congratulations are a treasured gift indeed! Thank you so much! Once again I wrestled with this contest theme and it is only through the gift of God's miraculous split wide open that this poem was born! I was delighted with its placement among so many wonderfully written poems. Hope you had a great weekend! Sending you all the blessings of God's miraculous.
Date: 7/2/2022 1:42:00 AM
Back to congratulate you. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 10:55:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the blessings of your congratulations. They are truly a gift! Sending you many blessings and a hug!
Date: 6/11/2022 9:57:00 PM
Wow, the poetry touches on much about 'today' Sam, Love the power driving this poetry, from beginning to end.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/5/2022 10:54:00 AM
Harry, I can't believe I missed your beautiful message! Please forgive my delay in answering your email. Like you I do believe the world of God's miraculous is truly driven by the driving force of love - restless, never tiring love and a force to be reckoned with at all times. Love is indeed the mysterious face of God. Sending you blessings of the miraculous split wide open!
Date: 6/11/2022 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful. I enjoyed this so much. A sure winner. God bless you with much inspiration. Love, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/13/2022 4:11:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem! You write so beautifully of God's miraculous love, your message means so much to me. Thank you! Sending you much love, blessings and hugs dear friend!
Date: 6/11/2022 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Sam, I like that it’s very inspirational. Good luck in the contest blessings my friend
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/13/2022 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve. So appreciative of your message and your best wishes for the contest! I kept thinking about the way God's miracles keep bursting into this world. Sending you bunches of blessings my friend!

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