Split Seconds

bolts of lightning flash...

  mighty oaks split in seconds

    ~ nature's gem-cutters
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:15 AM
That last line truly gives you the feel and the vision.
Fowler Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 6:41 AM
Another great haiku gw! Linda
Cunningham Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 1:43 AM
Nothing more powerful than mother nature, frightening but awesome to see Tom
Kiser Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 10:09 PM
A great depiction! Had to Fav.
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE, M.L. Always an honor for me. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
Y. Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Hi Gershon, You’ve penned a good “ Haiku” with vivid imagery. Well done. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Thanks for the encouragement, Alexis. Happiness and Light, Gershon
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