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Split Second Bliss

A fleeting vibe Just passing through Split second bliss I bump in to Disrupts the sad Dissolves the plain I’m feeling glad I can’t explain It’s bitter sweet A short lived joy Deceitful treat A glee decoy Not too much It’s just enough It gets me by When times are tough

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 9/13/2020 4:06:00 PM

An ably crafted artistic gem on a ubiquitously germane thematic choice...for, well, methinks we all need that 'paradise for a moment' sort of cathartic breeze - perhaps what you so fittingly refer to as a 'glee decoy':-)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/10/2020 6:36:00 PM

“a glee decoy”, you blow me away. So good. And everything Daniel and Rico said too. xomo

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/9/2020 9:52:00 AM

There are only two things I have found in life that provide a brief respite from the ugly rat race we call life , nature and music. At some point we all have to decompress or go nuts. I can definitely relate to this wonderful poem. It is a great talent to write a meaningful poem using simple words, Anna. It's the kind of poem people like to read. I hope you and yours are well.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/8/2020 12:27:00 PM

Best wishes for longer moments of bliss! Aloha! Rico