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Most times she wakes with radiant, full smile and eyes of blue that sparkle neath the sun. To be around her lifts our spirits while her upbeat nature spreads to everyone. For days, this personality can last, and spending time with her brings happy cheers. But then one morning she can turn so fast and wakes up sad and dark with flowing tears. Those days create glum weariness with fears her sunny smile, now gone, brings us malaise. We now must deal with bouts of falling tears and modify our life through stormy days. Her name is 'Weather' and she's such a tease- with come-and-go split personalities. May 14, 2016 ~5th Place~ Contest: Split Personalities Sponsor: Brian Davey Judged: 05/22/2016

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Date: 5/23/2016 1:21:00 PM
Love the twist! Congratulations, Sandra!
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Date: 5/23/2016 12:37:00 PM
Loved the theme interpretation here Sandra.
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Date: 5/23/2016 4:40:00 AM
Excellent Sandra! I sure didn't see the end coming. I thought maybe you were writing about bi-polar personality. I loved your entry! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/23/2016 2:20:00 AM
I like the take you gave on this contest incorporating the weather as the one with a split personality (which she does have). Congrats on your placement Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/23/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thank you for another great contest and for my nice placement! Sandra
Date: 5/18/2016 12:16:00 PM
Loves it totally,thanks Sandra.Its such a clever one!
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Date: 5/15/2016 2:27:00 AM
Of course, the last two lines were just marvellous!! I think it would be perfect for the 'Make their Jaws drop' Contest too!! :) :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/15/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sneha. I am pleased that you found the twist in my poem, and I think that so far, you've been the only one! I had already entered another poem in the 'make their jaws drop' contest. I appreciate your visit back to let me know! Thank you again. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/14/2016 10:04:00 AM
Oh, your ideas are always SO unique and amazing!! Such a lovely poem.. All the best in the contest, dear Sandra!! :) :)
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Sneha Rv
Date: 5/14/2016 3:33:00 PM
Yes, those two lines were just marvellous!! :) :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/14/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sneha...hope everyone gets the twist at the end. Hugs, Sandra

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