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swallows between worlds ripples streaking mirrored clouds ~ drinking on the wing 2020/05/06

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Date: 5/8/2020 11:11:00 AM
I read this a few times, & didn't want to echo ... love swallows, irrisdisent blue-black Tree Swallows near lakes in Maryland come to mind. Line 2 is sheer genius (if I may say so!) Peace/Paz/Pace
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Date: 5/7/2020 7:04:00 AM
Splendid, Maureen! I love poetry that transcends, rides a beam of light into infinity. This one does it.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Joe! Swallows are one of my favourite things, I suppose it shows ;), Have a lovely day!! xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 11:40:00 PM
A gorgeous haiku, Maureen. Splendid!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn! Hugs! xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 11:24:00 PM
Lovely. Deep thoughts. Best.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Mohan, a lovely day to you. xomo
Date: 5/6/2020 10:53:00 PM
A many-layered haiku. Have I ever read a better one? Maybe not! FAVE! Brilliant, Maureen! :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:56:00 AM
Oh wow <3 I howl for you Wolf Man! Thank you, xomo!