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Splendor Thirst

swallows between worlds ripples streaking mirrored clouds ~ drinking on the wing 2020/05/06

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/8/2020 11:11:00 AM

I read this a few times, & didn't want to echo ... love swallows, irrisdisent blue-black Tree Swallows near lakes in Maryland come to mind. Line 2 is sheer genius (if I may say so!) Peace/Paz/Pace

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/7/2020 7:04:00 AM

Splendid, Maureen! I love poetry that transcends, rides a beam of light into infinity. This one does it.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Joe! Swallows are one of my favourite things, I suppose it shows ;), Have a lovely day!! xomo

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/6/2020 11:40:00 PM

A gorgeous haiku, Maureen. Splendid!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you Evelyn! Hugs! xomo

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/6/2020 11:24:00 PM

Lovely. Deep thoughts. Best.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Mohan, a lovely day to you. xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/6/2020 10:53:00 PM

A many-layered haiku. Have I ever read a better one? Maybe not! FAVE! Brilliant, Maureen! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:56:00 AM

Oh wow <3 I howl for you Wolf Man! Thank you, xomo!