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Splendor Thirst

swallows between worlds

           ripples streaking mirrored clouds ~

                    drinking on the wing






2020/05/06

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2020

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May 8, 2020 at 11:11 AM

I read this a few times, & didn't want to echo ... love swallows, irrisdisent blue-black Tree Swallows near lakes in Maryland come to mind. Line 2 is sheer genius (if I may say so!) Peace/Paz/Pace

Joseph P. DiMino

May 7, 2020 at 7:04 AM

Splendid, Maureen! I love poetry that transcends, rides a beam of light into infinity. This one does it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2020 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Joe! Swallows are one of my favourite things, I suppose it shows ;), Have a lovely day!! xomo

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 6, 2020 at 11:40 PM

A gorgeous haiku, Maureen. Splendid!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2020 at 7:59 AM

Thank you Evelyn! Hugs! xomo

May 6, 2020 at 11:24 PM

Lovely. Deep thoughts. Best.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2020 at 7:58 AM

Thank you Mohan, a lovely day to you. xomo

May 6, 2020 at 10:53 PM

A many-layered haiku. Have I ever read a better one? Maybe not! FAVE! Brilliant, Maureen! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 7, 2020 at 7:56 AM

Oh wow <3 I howl for you Wolf Man! Thank you, xomo!

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