Splash!

Rain Pours down My galoshes Become stuffed with feet As I ready myself to Jump into all the mud puddles on my street

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Brian Hebisen

Date: 1/31/2009 8:01:00 PM

this is me and my three year old only we usually don't bother with the galoshes to my wifes delight....Brian

Corinne Curcio

Date: 1/29/2009 5:32:00 PM

Quite delightful! :-)

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/29/2009 1:13:00 PM

Dont think Ill be jumping into the mud puddles, but I can see myself doing the oppisite of it and going in the house. Loved this poetry, beautiful poetry from a beautiful woman. enjoyed reading it and have a great day.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/29/2009 3:23:00 AM

YAY! Can I play too? love this sweet write, love, Kristin

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/28/2009 8:51:00 PM

This is lovely. It made me think about when I was a kid and the puddles were just too tempting. I enjoyed this. Delightful! Love, Robin

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/28/2009 3:56:00 PM

I love this, I too love to walk and when it rains my feet get saturated with water. Great write...Raul