spitting stoned image

the gargoyle spouted restless streams until 
icicles silenced the steady façade’s faucet 
into perma-frosted solitude in meditation
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Rodgers Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 5:46 AM
Dear Kai, I love how the progression from restless activity to frozen solitude mirrors the spiritual journey from outward expression to inner contemplation. What a beautiful reflection on the transformative power of stillness and the hidden depths that can be found in moments of forced inaction. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Neumann Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. I started meditation a while ago. It gives so much peace and inspiration. Kind wishes, Kai
Lane Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 5:08 AM
I've always found it much easier to think in the quietude of tranquil waters. Nicely written, Kai.
Neumann Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 9:32 AM
So true. I also put the busy life behind me. Kind wishes, Kai
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