Spiritually Ill
Long was my time of proudly witnessing
her endless charms ability to seed smiles and
respect with Southern wiles aplenty.
Then, intrusion of quick insist, in shadowed shift,
gave glimpse of her facial expression failing her
known impression and lilt.
Flash lit sad scripts and ego drips, pained my
daughter pity adrift. Each year since, our
shared authentic love became more ripped as
she brazenly exposed self-loathing, clothed in
superior mode and attitude maintained by pathetic
tries to admire herself in other’s eyes.
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