William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Wadering Wayfarer Poetry Contest, sponsored by Nette Onclaud, dated 2025 October 24

Spiritual Sanctuary

Urbane hush is where you mend,
fractured parts learn to blend.
A quiet peace, a soft grace,
in this enshrined place.
The worn heart feels complete,
as ease climbs from the feet,
for the heart finds its calm beat.

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Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2025 at 1:02 PM Well done , Hilo. Big congrats

Sotto Poet October 26, 2025 at 8:56 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your contest win, dear friend. Outstanding poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2025 at 6:53 AM - Hilo, a lovely poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Reason A. Poteet October 26, 2025 at 5:05 AM Your last three lines compelled me to respond - beautiful thoughts to accompany your trip to "peace". Congrats on a singular piece.

Valsa George October 24, 2025 at 10:36 PM A beautiful feel of having entered a serene spiritual sanctuary. Lovely penning with great rhyme.