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Assuring more time to embrace the earth's sun Brings with it sweet pleasures summer has spun. Casting out a line in search of a suffering soul, Derives inner joy that is good for the whole. Everyone may soon become quite aware, Favoring the spirit gifts so much to share. God's greatest gifts are so freely given... Help yourself to the sweet fruits of heaven. Inside your mind lives pristine poetic flowers, Just let them flow through tips of your bowers. Kindred spirits will gravitate to your prose or rhyme, Lyrics that sway us, dancing in harmonic time. Moving to music creates tranquility, Neutralizing harsh sounds with indemnity. Omnipotence frees us from our emotional will, Penetrates our sanctuary when we are quiet and still. Quality not quantity of life's special dreams Related in love's happiness is all that it seems. Seeking to help others will benefit you Through the gift of your time, in kind things you do. Universal energy is captured by all, Vibrating in frequencies in an invisible pall. We may share with each other our auras divine Xyst beauty that surrounds in astrological trine. Yearning to spread peace to indifference I find; Zealous in my heart to share love with mankind. © Connie Marcum Wong July 22, 2015 Your Best Poem #2 Abecedarian Contest~Sixth Place~ Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 9/10/2015 9:28:00 PM
Just passing through to say hi. I have 9 comments to go and then off to try and catch up on shows. When I will write, who knows!!
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Date: 8/10/2015 2:19:00 PM
An awesome poem Connie. A hard form to think about and I have never done one. love phyl
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this deserved win, Connie! This form is far from easy to write, and you have performed an admirable job, even making use of delightful rhyme! The spiritual content and messages it conveys are the fruit of sincere love.#7 + fav hugs // paul
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:36:00 AM
Connie, you did so well in this one!!! I love the uplifting thought!!!COngratulations! ~OLive Eloisa
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Date: 7/26/2015 8:30:00 PM
This is spiritual joy, Connie, and a joy to read every line! I do love this form...it's challenging especially with a rhyme scheme! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:04:00 AM
Hi, Connie! Your love for others shines through in this poem. Congratulations on your win and thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 7/25/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hi Connie, this is so beautiful - the imagery, the flow, the artistry, and sentiments! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Well-deserved and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/25/2015 12:19:00 PM
You have tapped into one of the great universal truisms that is intrinsic to every spirits well being - Very nicely put, Connie! My very best regards - As always! Your friend - :) john
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:27:00 PM
Back again with a BIG congrats to my lovely friend, who writes like a wizard!!
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
Connie,, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful spiritual write, Connie! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 5:30:00 AM
A spiritual explosion that inundates the soul! Superb, dear Connie and a 7!
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Date: 7/24/2015 5:29:00 AM
such a lovely pen Connie congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:46:00 AM
- Connie, congratulations on your wonderful winning poem !!! (7) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:11:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Connie! Great poetry!
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:41:00 PM
You go Connie! Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:07:00 PM
From A to Z you weave a web of beauty that shimmers with talent. Emile.
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:38:00 PM
Connie, I had a feeling this would place. Congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:34:00 PM
a beautiful spiritual write Connie congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:15:00 PM
shadow is going to love this, Connie. I entered an oldie about zoo animals and she did not want names of things like I did it. But this kind takes so much work, so i never did one. THe other one I have in this form was already used in another ABC contest of Shadow's!! GREAT Job, connie
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:20:00 PM
Connie, you have penned a beautiful spiritual poem to accompany the lovely image, I like this form , I have done about two in this form and thanks for visiting my poem, dripping sweetness and your condolences, I was shattered when my Violet Patches died , I did not want another cat ,no cat would replace her but then came a little kitten needing a home, I did not want to love her but she wiggled herself into my heart and now there is Eve Snuggles to play with my old old cat Pearl Smudges ..
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:10:00 AM
Your write is great, I love this piece of yours...........A.M.
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:55:00 AM
truly very beautifully painted piece connie wishing you a lovely day
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:38:00 AM
Thanks for your positive thoughts and advise. Very useful spiritual write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:08:00 AM
I tend to think of this form as one of Poetry's 'dark arts', and you are exceptionally well versed in it, Connie. This is a terrific one, and it flows so well. A Fave and a #7. Will do well. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:29:00 AM
Well my friend you have made my night! Thank you so much for fav'ing it and for your wonderful comment. Since my computer is moving so slow, I am giving up commenting for tonight. Blessings, Connie
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