Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Spiritual Gem Inside Me

The spiritual gem inside me,
sometimes sounds like a huge buzzing bee.
This rumbling sound makes me want to flee,
flee to peace and not for glee.
I know when my soul needs to rest,
as I put it back into my chest.
This crazy world has it dressed,
now my soul needs to pass the test.
Even when we are both all stressed,
quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest.

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Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2025 at 10:24 AM Great job, I like your take on the theme. Your spirit shines. Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2025 at 12:10 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be a, Great job. Our soul needs quietness and prayer from time to time. I have been off the computer for a number of days. I needed rest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Len Gasun June 28, 2025 at 3:42 AM A beautiful uplifting poem my dearest poet friend. I've immensely enjoyed. I especially love the 2 last lines for our nutritious foods for thughts and soul. So grateful to you again. Hugs God bless and best wishes in the contest. Paula Goldsmith June 28, 2025 at 12:45 PM Thanks for your best wishes in the contest. So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, A beautiful uplifting poem. Great you enjoyed this one. Hugs... Our soul needs quietness and prayer. Have a blessed day writing away............

Gershon Wolf June 26, 2025 at 8:13 PM Bee good to yourself, please, Pala. ~ Spirited and Sanctified Paula Goldsmith June 28, 2025 at 12:41 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you enjoyed this one. I should beeeee better to myself. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Kim Rodrigues June 26, 2025 at 7:23 AM Yes it does…like a buzzing bee! Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2025 at 7:49 AM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you enjoyed this one. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Ink Empress June 26, 2025 at 2:19 AM Yea silence and prayer can fill our heart with zest dear paula, i think there is a spiritual gem inside you forever shining and glistening and it reflects through your poetry and interactions! You are a gem of a soul! Pleasure reading this . Sending you light always! Best wishes for the contest Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2025 at 7:48 AM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Thanks for your, Best wishes for the contest. Also thanks for your very kind words, they were a real joy to hear. Glad you enjoyed this one. I enjoyed writing it. Prayer is always the key. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2025 at 4:44 PM This poem is wonderful and insightful, Paula, Quietness and prayer are very vital to the soul. Have a wonderful day. Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2025 at 7:42 AM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, wonderful and insightful. Our soul needs quietness and prayer. Have a blessed day writing away............

Oliver Mckeithan June 24, 2025 at 12:07 AM Wonderful poem Paula. The rhyming and flow are excellent. Paula Goldsmith June 24, 2025 at 12:30 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be a, Wonderful poem. It was fun to write. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Sam Kauffman June 23, 2025 at 1:18 PM Just lovely, Paula and filled with wisdom. Yes, we do need to rest to be refreshed and refilled! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:28 PM Thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, Just lovely. I enjoyed writing this one. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

CayCay Godwin June 23, 2025 at 11:28 AM Enjoyed your rhyme scheme on this one, a delight to read ... CayCay Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:26 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, a delight to read. It was fun to write this one. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2025 at 6:53 AM - A lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:25 PM Thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, A lovely poem. It was fun to bring this one to life. Hugs... Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Beryl Edmonds June 23, 2025 at 2:19 AM A lovely spiritual gem your poem is Paula… Beryl Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:23 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, A lovely spiritual gem. It was fun to bring this one to life. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Valsa George June 22, 2025 at 10:34 PM "Even when we are both all stressed, quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest." I do agree with you cent percent, dear Paula. Prayer in solitude is the best antidote to stress and the right key to pass every test. Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:19 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you enjoyed this one. I enjoyed writing it. Prayer is always the key. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Constance La France June 22, 2025 at 8:18 PM Paula, very nice, well done ~ Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:17 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, very nice, well done. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2025 at 5:34 PM Communication with God through Jesus Christ in a quiet time is such a great way to destress and enjoy life once again. Sara K Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:15 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you enjoyed this one. I enjoyed writing it. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Joseph May June 22, 2025 at 3:55 PM We get that zest from peace and prayer, Nicely penned Paula Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:12 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, Nicely penned. Yes, you are right when you say, "We get that zest from peace and prayer," I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Abdullah Alhemaidy June 22, 2025 at 2:31 PM Wonderful poem! A favorite :-) Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:09 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be a, Wonderful poem. I see fav??? Thanks, you have made my day very happy. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Panagiota Romios June 22, 2025 at 1:59 PM I really enjoyed this creation Paula, Expressing the truth about yourself, iabout yourself I thnk is perfect. That takes courage! Heavy literary works do not impress me, simple poetry. Some of the best poets in histort are honest poets. Pangie Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:07 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you enjoyed this creation. It was fun to write. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Heidi Sands June 22, 2025 at 1:04 PM This is very nice Paula. You have described the need for soulful peace very well. I like the ending too. Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Great writing. I hope you have a nice evening :) Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:05 PM So glad you could come over to read and write on my "Spiritual Gem Inside Me" rhyme write. Glad you found this to be, Great writing. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hugs... Quietness and prayer will fill us with new zest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2025 at 12:12 PM Spiritual Gem Inside Me ~ Date Written:6/22/225 ~ Written By Human Poet........