Spiritual Apathy

My spiritual APATHY has 
            d r o w n   in the waters of a dead reverie,
my intense desperation has
washed up along the frigid arctic tidal shore.
In this time of remorse
            I hold onto moments of despondency,
for DESPAIR prevails...
                               once more. 

                           When the tides crash, 
                           my futility becomes hope-
                           when the holy waters drip, 
                           is when I can no longer cope.

Misery has become my  w e a k n e s s,
             trivial ANGUISH has been held with desire.
The chills of a fever runs down my spine,             
burning my soul into  e t e r n a l  fire.
For I can no longer see what is mine, 
            as this DEJECTION has brought me higher.
I walk the narrow line...
                     one last time.

                             When founts cascade, 
                             I hear imperfection-
                             I crave divinity,
                             a blissful connection. 

  Ten thousand wars have come, 
                       FIVE THOUSANDS more to arrive.
I've been  t r a p p e d  in fate's fear
without the motivation to survive.
                    I am crippled when pain does appear,
and with each breath death comes with insecurity.
  I'm a willow weeping, each barren branch reminds me of...
                                               life's obscurity.
 
                           When mountains crumble, 
                           my contentedness flees-
                           it's only constant heartache,
                           that my CRAVING SOUL sees.  




NA in contest: CONTEST NO 365, any theme, 
any form, max of 25 lines
Judged: 11/19/2017 2:43:00 PM

Another 2017 Stunner Poetry Contest

Date Written: October 11, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/20/2018 4:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sorrowful poem that goes to the soul. An emotive write well done.
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Date: 4/19/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Laura, with this lovely poem of deep emotion. Congrats on a most deserving silver medal win.
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:29:00 AM
Much emotion! The anguish of the soul...
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