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HexSonnetta
The HexSonnetta, created by Andrea Dietrich, consists of two six-line stanzas and a finishing rhyming couplet with the following set of rules: Six syllables per line,
Rhyme Scheme: a/bb/aa/b    c/dd/cc/d ee

      

"History's more than a collection of facts...it's about people" by poet. Black people were stolen, trodden on and beaten. Classified a cretin like an ape in a zoo, oft whipped and branded too, some were even eaten. They were worked until bent, their heritage was mocked. Runaway slaves were stalked; fleeing chains and torment death was a nonevent, their every escape, blocked. Their spirits unbroken, black hopes have awoken.

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Date: 11/25/2021 9:23:00 AM
Strong words written beautifully. Those painful words need repeating until they're finally grasped. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/25/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Ann, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/20/2021 7:33:00 AM
Very powerful, congrats on your top win!
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Date: 11/20/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/16/2021 1:10:00 PM
Emile, spectacular HexSonnetta and congratulations on your First Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems and I love your created quote and the image used ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/17/2021 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, your inspiring contests tend to excite my muse my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2021 2:17:00 PM
Great write, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/15/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/15/2021 10:25:00 AM
Great work on ethnicity. Beautifully written poem. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/15/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your thoughtful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/13/2021 3:15:00 AM
This is poetry at its best. I agree with your every word your every line. I come from South Africa, and although born in Athens Greece, have lived in the once Rhodesia and Zambia and from my late teens in South Africa. It was sad to see apartheid having come from Zambia and having left some wonderful black and Indian friends behind. Jubilant that 'black hopes have awoken' far too late in our lives did this happen. Visited Amazon,you have many books published - kudos Emile, best wishes for the contest Jenn.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/13/2021 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Jennifer, we are of one mind and one heart in this matter, I appreciate your detailed and informative comments my friend, Emile.
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