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Spiritory

Lips kiss and whisper Transmute our power Create windless tunnels Tornado of faith Blizzard of hate Summer of love Signal decay Tell me it is the end And I have gone too far Autumn has begun An eclipse revealing our black star. Divulge the truth Her Transpiration Explodes the sun. Cold winter exists within unsaid words we are destined To rule our worlds

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Richard H. Dunsany

Date: 2/25/2017 8:26:00 PM

No comments? What a travesty! Allow me to remedy that. Joel, thought I'd begin with your first upload, and this poem exudes an excellent dark power and grandeur. Your flow kept me reading, and the quick explosion from a kiss billowing into nature was done very well. Though "Cold winter" is redundant, I couldn't help but enjoy it, and I truly enjoyed the ending statement of finality. I look forward to reading more of your work.