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Spiritory

Lips kiss and whisper
Transmute our power
Create windless tunnels
Tornado of faith
Blizzard of hate
Summer of love
Signal decay
Tell me it is the end
And I have gone too far
Autumn has begun
An eclipse revealing
our black star.
Divulge the truth
Her Transpiration
Explodes the sun.
Cold winter
exists within
unsaid words
we are destined
To rule our worlds

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Richard H. Dunsany

Date: 2/25/2017 8:26:00 PM

No comments? What a travesty! Allow me to remedy that. Joel, thought I'd begin with your first upload, and this poem exudes an excellent dark power and grandeur. Your flow kept me reading, and the quick explosion from a kiss billowing into nature was done very well. Though "Cold winter" is redundant, I couldn't help but enjoy it, and I truly enjoyed the ending statement of finality. I look forward to reading more of your work.