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Spirited Gestures

*Image of Morning Rise by Giphy. Spirited Gestures Cast restlessness about the wind, That toss and empty leaves from trees, The autumn season sees them thinned, A tingling sense of breathing squeeze, Be auburn reds hint golden scene, Like royal robes and crowning queen. Genteel polish a crystal shine, Oblige passage involving wake, Luster beckons whispering shrine, A pristine call edges a lake, Mindful ears recognize courses, Coming wafts like thirsty horses. Slight Boreas push chills a bit, Zephyrus cut short, warms again, A tit for tat that never quit, The disturbed rest till strength regain, Nature takes heed and nothing more, Benumbed deep down within its core. Relaxed lay calm felt now surrounds, Idling base fresh breezes fill, Perianths rise and fall on grounds, Prompts unfailing the currents spill, Unseen traces the length of thee, Forces abound heaven's decree. 2022 September 28 *8th Place* A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 September 28 *RZ; ababcc, dedeff, ghghii, jkjkll. HMS; 8 syllables per 24 lines.
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Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 8:04 AM
I really like this one William. Wow - congrats on your win! Linda
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:14 AM
I'm appreciative, Linda, for your welcoming expressions my friend, Aloha William
Kauffman Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Congratulation on your win William! I love all the references to the Greek gods of the wind woven so effortlessly into your unique write! Blessings of the season to you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Heartfelt thanks, Sam, for your compassionate considerations my friend, Aloha William
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 12:15 PM
way to go in Brian's contest, William. Keep up the good work.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 2, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Thanks, Andrea, it means a lot my friend, Aloha William
Rose  Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 4:14 AM
wonderfully penned congrats
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Thank you my friend, Aloha William
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