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Spirit of the Wind

Forever changing
the
s p i r i t
of the wind

swishing
	swirling
churning

Grasping onto
l o s t s o u l s
		stealing
hopes and dreams

T h r a s h i n g
like a 
	wounded
animal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jain Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Waiting for part 2. I thoroughly enjoyed your creative verse. New way of expressing excellent ideas by a verse. Highly creative verse.Start & end match greatly. Of course, second part may have something more for me. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style.
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September 3, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Rhetorical devices really add beauty to the poem. Arrangement of words too is special. Fine words at fine position with fine devices. Great work! Words are few to show your talent. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style. Your view is encouragement for me & Pari Style.
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