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Spirit of the Falls

tangled convictions
cascading..... purifying
rainbows birth anew
For Raul's Rhythm of the Falls Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/20/2009 1:46:00 PM
hey we're both into cascades! good one Jimbo! Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your honourable mention in Raul's Rhythm of the Falls contest.
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Date: 10/25/2009 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful Jim ... congrats on your win in Raul's contest ... and thankxxx for your comments on my Transitions poem... your imagery is superb .. will be reading your other creations this week... bravo! Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/24/2009 8:30:00 PM
Dear James, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved Win in Raul's Contest Excellent concept "rainbows birth anew" YOUR Talent Shines through ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/24/2009 3:26:00 PM
I love it, Jim. Very beautiful image. Nicely executed Haiku. Thank you for sharing. Thank you as always about your nice comments on my poems. And oh, by the way, just to let you know, I did check, "Angel of Hadley", fascinating story. Thank you again for sharing. Love, Caroline.
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Jim, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. (You did good!!!) Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...I loved all of these Hailus and I'm just glad I didn't have to judge...Marty
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations, James!! Great imagery here!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:34:00 AM
Well penned and a winner in my book. Deserving to be featured in the hot poems list. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:22:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your BEAUTIFUL haiku win, Jim. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:31:00 PM
congrats on p;acing in the contest!!
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Rauls contest, Jim! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:41:00 PM
Such a wonderful entry to Raul's contest!! Congratulations on this honorable mention and amazing poem! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:42:00 PM
Congratulations James! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:41:00 PM
JMG, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/12/2009 5:15:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku James! Good luck in the contest! Thank you for commenting on mine also! ::grin:: ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:47:00 AM
Excellent! perfect imagery and flow! Best of luck in the contest, James! Audrey (Ladybug12)
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Date: 10/12/2009 7:07:00 AM
Dear James, such a creative Haiku. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:52:00 PM
Best wishes with this one Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:35:00 AM
Jim, that's nice! The beautiful spiritual image brought to mind with your poem certainly delights the soul and pleases that judge on high. Very well written, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:09:00 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2009 8:38:00 AM
Beautiful, inspiring piece, Jim! Wonderful imagery and sentiment. Good luck in Rauls' contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/10/2009 4:14:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Seems that he will have some great ones to chose from. Nicely done. I really like the second line. Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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