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Spirit of Surrender

Spirit of Surrender 
Be quiet now rest your heart and soul,
your dream will never be fulfilled, let it  go now, 
walk in the garden of elderliness 
your journey was the quest and there was
No goal to reach, neither laurel nor applause, 
just you plow through the ocean of life.
and that is enough for any man.
Rest now old man wake up early, see the sunrise
while walking barefoot on summer grass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Collins Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful in its realization. love, Kathy
Hansen Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 1:39 PM
thank you my dear
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