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Spirit From the Past

As I sit upon the cloud, my sister SPIRIT, we shall call  ----  “ ALWAYS “
Visits : bringing Her inner Soul with Virtue of  the Heart  ----  FOREVER
 I believe I know YOU from “ Yesterday “  Please help me --- REMEMBER
As She spoke : the Lyric of Her voice : brings memories   -----           I
Envision YOU “  my little Sister ’ Long ago Lost in LOVE; in  ---   LOVE
Through the mirrors of YOUR EYES : Brother, Sister : Me and  --  YOU
Loving Parents , from a Time in History :  where my Heart is of   ---  MY
Searching Soul, “ alive comes the past “ :  growing up with MY   ----  SISTER
Together we speak of “Forever LOVE” with an opened Heartfelt  ----  SPIRIT
As we meet AGAIN in Time KNOW ALWAYS that I LOVE YOU  ---   L Y N E T T E 

     Dedicated To My Kindred SPIRIT Lynette Chachere  “ Spirits Together “


Author’s Note : The origin of  “ End Line Word “ Form Is a Dedication Where the
Vertical Line is the “Dedication” and the Body  “ IS the Why “ Thank-YOU to all 
Who have Supported Dane and I in Our Endeavor To create a New Form of POETRY
Dealing with Honor to Each Contemporary YOUR Participation Is Astounding ALWAYS YOURS…
HG
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Villarosa Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Now I know the origin of this "End Line Word". This is a perfect guidepost for this kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing this, HGarvey. (^_^) Noel.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 8:09 AM
I am hoving truoble staying logged in today, it is getting me aggravated. i think I am stopping for a while. Great job hear!!
Gorelick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM
There are people in this world that we have a special kinship with..It does seem weve had relationsjips before. So interesting to think about. Write on HG..Love, BG
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Beatifullly written and excellent end line. Thank you for all your comments today. I wrote two poems the other day and lost them, somehow I wasn't logged in, but will write them again later on. Thanks again for your inspiration for me to keep on writing. My brother Gary is my kindred spirit. I lost him when I was 19 and he was 23. I had just had a baby and lost a baby shortly the same year before he past on. I was pregnant again at the time he died. I had a dream we flew together. June Ellen
Haick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Thanks to you and Dane Ann for this fantastic poetry form, HG. Great job with this example, too. Peace, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Great job you've done here Hg, on this memorial to a beloved sister. Her soul in spirit is forever free in the ether of the sacred Agape. Drop by and read the end line I wrote if you find the time. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today HG my forever friend.. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Beautiful Dedication coming from your heart. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 8:42 AM
You have soup mail. Sara
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February 24, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Heartfelt poem--the emotion comes through your words. Nice tribute to your kindred spirit. You have me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. PS--I'm glad to see your new form taking off. Best wishes with it!! Karen
Chachere Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Aww.i'll just have to keep this forever, from a great SPIRIT brother(: i've been working on a poem called :Her lost brother: since yesterday. that brother i write is your soul. its attached to the family in :Her journal of an unsolved enigma: and im almost done. im either posting it today or tomorrow. SO much love to you! this means a lot to me! -Always&Forever your sister spirit, Lynn
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:43 PM
Interesting end-line write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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