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Spirit Eye

The spirit eye knows the beginning and the end of all things. There is no substance through which it cannot penetrate. No place does it store anger, love or hate. It simply rides each thought to the end and sorts out each possibility, laying the results at the makers feet. Raising some to the sublime, and some ………to the end of the line. God usually doesn’t interfere, giving us free will. We usually reap what we sow, the good with the bad. The two edged sword always following close in the shadow With the spirit eye ever looking, dwelling on the edge of reason. For Rick's "Spirit Eye" contest
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Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest of Rick, Charles
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Charles, in ^Rick's contest "Spirit Eye". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Very nice Charles I like how the verse is shaped like an hour glass at least it is for me! And I had not thought of the third eye in this way, i see it as personal intuition? anyway FINE write! Light & Love
George   Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Very profound and powerful. I love the last line, Charles. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Congrats Charles on your marvelous win in the spirit eye contest with this stunning and intense write ... enjoy another great win with luv..
Maverick Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 6:04 PM
a placement result Charles, good news! and i will give it a 7.!
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February 1, 2011 at 9:16 PM
Artistic presentation. Much for the reader to ponder about. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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