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Panther calling Kestrel-- over No response Panther calling Kestrel-- over No response Panther calling Kestrel, time is critical--over No response Kestrel calling Panther, break in comms, big spinning top is taking us into wintertime, you are among friends, sending new coordinates-- over No response Kestrel calling Panther--over No response Panther this is Kestrel, data coming in now, need immediate sitrep-- over Panther, calling Kestrel, 19 confirmed, 4 casualties, 4 walking-- over Kestrel to Panther, go silent--over. (F**K) Kestrel, calling Panther-- over Panther -- over They were friendlies, need to put this down to a bad day at the office, it happens, passing upstairs to hats. Wait out. Kestrel calling Panther— over. Panther-- over Status has now changed, this is no longer a friendly country. Repeat this is no longer a friendly country, previous sitrep reads, 27 confirmed. Is this correct-- over Panther–- correct-- over OK Panther– suggest immediate sabbatical. The big bus is waiting. Kestrel to Panther__ out.

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Date: 4/11/2024 6:23:00 PM
what an intriguing story and unique physical structure to your poem. I rather liked it once I 'got into' the format. Have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/12/2024 9:02:00 AM
The intrigue.

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