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Spinning Ducks

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ice melts on heated 

glass like ducks spinning atop

puddles of warm rain

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Eve Roper

July 16, 2015 at 5:58 PM

The imagery is incredible a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos

July 16, 2015 at 7:41 AM

Congratulations on a fine win, dear Lycia! great haiku - love the brilliant imagery! Pandita

Jan Allison

July 16, 2015 at 2:41 AM

congrats on your win Lycia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

July 16, 2015 at 12:40 AM

Congrats, Lycia! Your reply to Andrea made me think...hmmn...

Lycia Harding

July 29, 2015 at 11:03 PM

Hi Kim! Thank you. Yes, this Haiku is about tweeekers!

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2015 at 11:35 PM

never heard that slang before that you explained down here!! Congrats. I see you won!!

Lycia Harding

July 15, 2015 at 11:55 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I see YOU won! Congrats again, xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

July 15, 2015 at 11:20 PM

Lycia, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Lycia Harding

July 15, 2015 at 11:53 PM

Thank you PD, back at ya! xoxo

Viv Wigley

July 15, 2015 at 11:12 PM

Love the imagery, Lycia, well done. Viv x

Lycia Harding

July 15, 2015 at 11:50 PM

Thank you, Viv. xoxo

Skat A

July 15, 2015 at 10:49 PM

Lycia:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**

Lycia Harding

July 15, 2015 at 11:48 PM

Thank you, SKAT. Excellent topic for a contest! More, please...xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2015 at 10:41 PM

wow that is a very imaginative picture you created!

Lycia Harding

July 14, 2015 at 2:22 AM

Thank you, Andrea. If you'd like to know the truth, this poem is about annoying tweakers. We call them "spun ducks". But shhhh, don't let that get around...