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Spinning a Love Dream

In a state of half wakefulness, Amid shadowy playfulness, I lay dreaming of handsome you, Looking at me with eyes so blue, Blue stare awoke me from my dream, Surrounded by night's moonlit gleam, Drawn to you by love that disarms, Couldn't resist your magical charms, Charmed music wafted through the air, Flute and violin notes declare Your unending passion for me, Making me twirl in ecstasy, Ecstasy as you lead me on To love's garden, decked in chiffon, How can I not follow behind? You have dazzled my lovestruck mind, Minds dance in tandem with night's rhythm, Covered in starlight's sparkling prism, You and me, for each other made, In sync with midnight moods, we swayed, Swayed till love's pirouette is done, You kiss me and a new dream's spun...

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Date: 7/15/2023 10:05:00 AM
Lovely write my friend Jo, romantically sensuous Congrats! :)
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Date: 7/13/2023 4:32:00 AM
WOW. This is amazing, I just love this so. God bless you and Congrats on the top win,. love, Gina
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Date: 7/11/2023 6:51:00 PM
I am quite charmed by your chanso! Congratulations, Joanna!
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Date: 5/1/2023 11:21:00 PM
Nice dream ...Joanna. Staring at you and eyes say.. Saying : you are most good and kind person ever seen. " Someone can sleep with the shoes on a white sheet. I like this lovely poem and which I read today.
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Date: 4/30/2023 3:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Joanna. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated. Best of luck to you in the contest!
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:32:00 PM
Great penning Joanna, with lovely rhyme and flow with nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:15:00 AM
Very creative and romantic verse Joanna, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:27:00 AM
Dancing in the moonlight... You've set quite the romantic scene, Jo. Even if it's just a dream.
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Date: 4/30/2023 1:19:00 AM
You sent me into ecstasy with this poem.
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