Spindle of Anima

Give me a shelter to interpret these feelings
A locus where my brain could redeem the shackles of its echoes
Domination of intrigues try to play on my guile
I wish someone could fathom the grains of these ambiguities

Pardon for the perplexity which occured beyond my capacity
Half of my soul was hijacked by delusion
Trapped by the dreams which yet ever attained
Commute in the same rotation, my hope never sustained

I owe too many words and drama
Hey anima
You let yourself churned in silence
Your guts are not equal to the enthusiasm which soar

Being a fiction hermit in my own kingdom
Shall I amused by the potion of devil's words
Seems like I take a journey on a ferris wheel or a spin on merry go round
Which having the same tracks but serve a distinct point of view

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/29/2015 8:57:00 AM
- A new weekend :)) - I send one hugs to Ken and you - Enjoy your days with a lot of play and fun - hugs (in Norwegian) : KLEM // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/30/2015 8:40:00 AM
Hug back to you too Anne and that is special from me and Ken :D have a nice weekend :)
Date: 5/28/2015 8:18:00 AM
You are a unique person and poet, Yanny. Your words grab the reader and I feel I'm there with you, in your anguished moment which result in a gripping write. A 7. Hugs to you! Kim
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/30/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim, you also one of a kind, your comments always bring freshness to me :) hug, yanny
Date: 5/27/2015 12:23:00 AM
Expressed as only you can express. I love how you communicate your ideas!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/27/2015 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Rick, glad to have your visit today :) hug back!
Date: 5/24/2015 8:55:00 AM
- My dear friend Yanny .... life is unimaginably many rounds on the ferris wheel, sometimes we want to stop ..... other times we take too many rounds - Hope all is well with you :) - (I read your poem yesterday, but did not have time to comments) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2015 11:44:00 AM
- A three-day long weekend .... I had thought to do a lot in my garden .... but it rains a lot and ice cold winds - All is well with me :) - Good to hear you are fine - a big hug to Ken ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/24/2015 9:39:00 AM
Hey Anne, I'm good here, and Ken too :D, thank you for revisiting me and kindly make sure to leave a supporting comment in my page. It has brighten up my evening, how is your weekend? Actually, this poem took 3 days for me to finish it, because I suddenly lost interest in writing, and it's kinda freaking me out :) hug, yanny
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