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Spilled Ink

the broken pen

stains divorce papers

love on the line

absencesenryu

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Thomas Martin

January 24, 2016 at 3:44 PM

Excellent senryru with "aha" moment!

Scott Thirtyseven

June 22, 2015 at 8:04 AM

Wonderful...

James Fraser

June 10, 2015 at 2:44 PM

So true Charmaine, so true, but sometimes it's for the best so that both can move on. I've moved on, James....

Gary Bateman

June 9, 2015 at 7:33 AM

Charma, Quite emotive and very well-done!! Best Always, Gary

Sara Kendrick

June 3, 2015 at 3:55 PM

That is a very expressive, emotive and descriptive one in just a few words..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit by my blog..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2015 at 11:58 PM

wow, Charma, You said so much with so few words. LOVE this.

Liam Mcdaid

May 29, 2015 at 12:53 PM

deeply touching piece i can relate charmaine excellent pen dear pal

Richard Lamoureux

May 27, 2015 at 6:28 PM

Ha ha, I love it!

Paul Callus

May 26, 2015 at 7:01 AM

A broken pen that leads to broken relationships. Another sad part of reality show. // paul

Tim Ryerson

May 26, 2015 at 6:56 AM

Though heartbreaking, this is one of the best Senryu I have read Charma...How are you my friend? - Tim

Charmaine Chircop

May 26, 2015 at 8:24 AM

This is nit about me my good friend..but about the ugly reality around us. Im fine cheer cup as ever : )

Brian Martin

May 26, 2015 at 6:17 AM

Yes, it is. Great one Charma!

Skat A

May 25, 2015 at 8:22 PM

a tough thing to go through penned well, enjoyed this one .. *always, S.K.A.T.*

Anna Hopper

May 25, 2015 at 3:01 PM

Drawn in by the name and hooked after letting the words resonate for a minute. At first glance it seems so simple. It is much more than that though! Excellent, excellent job! A 7 and beyond!