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Spilled Ink

the broken pen stains divorce papers love on the line

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Thomas Martin

Date: 1/24/2016 3:44:00 PM

Excellent senryru with "aha" moment!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/22/2015 8:04:00 AM

Wonderful...

James Fraser

Date: 6/10/2015 2:44:00 PM

So true Charmaine, so true, but sometimes it's for the best so that both can move on. I've moved on, James....

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/9/2015 7:33:00 AM

Charma, Quite emotive and very well-done!! Best Always, Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2015 3:55:00 PM

That is a very expressive, emotive and descriptive one in just a few words..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit by my blog..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2015 11:58:00 PM

wow, Charma, You said so much with so few words. LOVE this.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/29/2015 12:53:00 PM

deeply touching piece i can relate charmaine excellent pen dear pal

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/27/2015 6:28:00 PM

Ha ha, I love it!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/26/2015 7:01:00 AM

A broken pen that leads to broken relationships. Another sad part of reality show. // paul

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/26/2015 6:56:00 AM

Though heartbreaking, this is one of the best Senryu I have read Charma...How are you my friend? - Tim

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/26/2015 8:24:00 AM

This is nit about me my good friend..but about the ugly reality around us. Im fine cheer cup as ever : )

Brian Martin

Date: 5/26/2015 6:17:00 AM

Yes, it is. Great one Charma!

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 8:22:00 PM

a tough thing to go through penned well, enjoyed this one .. *always, S.K.A.T.*

Anna Hopper

Date: 5/25/2015 3:01:00 PM

Drawn in by the name and hooked after letting the words resonate for a minute. At first glance it seems so simple. It is much more than that though! Excellent, excellent job! A 7 and beyond!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/25/2015 2:45:00 PM

wow, wow , wow, I so loved this one!!! Well done!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/25/2015 2:39:00 PM

sad when ink spilled in wrong paper... well done ,Charma :O))

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2015 2:35:00 PM

Very deep Charma...been there....hard to get those ink stains out....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2015 2:12:00 PM

oh this is deep and sad Charma:-( Hugs Jan xx