Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

Spilled Coffee

The coffee spilled as she went out the door
Now brown stains 'pon the carpet on the floor
It saturated her dictionary
Her poetry notebook~both necessary
A little mess that needs to be cleaned now
What would happen if today out she did bow
Entered into another worldly realm
As she so ponders being overwhelmed
Which is more important her writings dear
Or worn carpet 'pon the floor tattered severe
  

Finis'..

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S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari August 13, 2013 at 9:44 AM Wow great piece. Love it. :)

Gail Debole June 22, 2013 at 9:49 AM Yes...balancing the importance of daily tasks and creativity...your poem ponders the situation in a beautifully crafted way. Enjoyed reading!

Harry Horsman June 19, 2013 at 10:19 AM extremely poetic, Sara, just love this....

Mario De Paz June 19, 2013 at 9:02 AM Good rhymes, good finish!

Poet. Undertaker June 19, 2013 at 2:45 AM great work. comment on my poems

Shadow Hamilton June 18, 2013 at 4:30 PM what a conundrum which to save definitely the notebook for me lol this is super Sara adding to favs Shadow x smiles

Sheol Moribund June 18, 2013 at 4:14 PM Hello Sara: Great poem!!! Been there and done that, lol!!! Have a great day.

Nette Onclaud June 18, 2013 at 12:18 PM What a quandary,sara... love how you took this theme with words that float and disarm.. i'll save the noteboook anytime.. wondeful...:) huggs and more prayers..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2013 at 11:52 AM - Much mess with coffee spills ... - A nice poem Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2013 at 12:50 PM you fired my interest, sara... finely written as i look forward to how this will finally go.. more prayers for you and the famliy!..:) huggs

Russell Sivey June 17, 2013 at 10:55 AM It has been a delight to read what you have written so far! I am intrigued as to how this poem will finish! This is a wonderful beginning, Great Work!!

Mario De Paz June 17, 2013 at 10:39 AM I do not know how you will finish this little poem, already dirtened by coffee, a stain quite difficult to remove, unless your imagination transforms this stain into some wonderful thought! I am expecting anxiously.