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Spilled Coffee

At the shopping mall Coffee in my hand Along with a scorn I choose a table To enjoy my treat A loud noise s is heard It had startled me Coffee in my hand Then landed on me From my top to slack A horrible mess Tried to clean it up Did the best i could Stains did not wash off So spent the whole noon Shopping in stained clothes Till i found a new top Replaced to wear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/9/2018 9:28:00 AM
That horrible mess is anger I am trying to get rid of. Happens too often so I bought 10 spill proof cups and take it with me like a part of clothing. No one ever complains not even restaurants. Nice write
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2018 2:14:00 PM
Hello Juman that is a good idea. I think I will bring my f[travel mug with me that way it won't get spilled. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/10/2018 12:07:00 PM
For me the coffee represents the balance we strive for in our lives and the spill along with what caused it is the irony.
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Date: 7/7/2018 6:07:00 PM
Hello Richard I like what you said about spilled coffee. I just wake up when i have my coffee in the morning.Have a nice evening mu friend.
Date: 6/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
Not at all a nice experience, Darlene, but these things do happen and they ruin our day. I hope you at least managed to eat your scone before moving on. Regards // paul
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2018 10:55:00 AM
Hello Paul, are you feeling better from your fall? be careful next time. I ende up getting a new top on sale.yes did have my scone Regards,Darlene.
Date: 6/6/2018 5:23:00 PM
You turned an embarrassing situation into a lovely poem Darlene. Sorry this happened to you but at least you bought a new top and wrote a new poem about it.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2018 5:53:00 PM
Hello James,yes it was embrassing, I did handle it well.I cleaned off as much as I could, then bought a top on sale. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/6/2018 5:42:00 PM
Hello James,yes it was embrassing, I did handle it well.I cleaned off as much as I could, then bought a top on sale. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 6/5/2018 9:22:00 AM
hey..not sure why u can not read the soup mail..everything is turned on and others receive it :))
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2018 12:18:00 PM
Okay i will try again.
Date: 6/5/2018 9:22:00 AM
hey..not sure why u can not read the soup mail..everything is turned on and others receive it :))
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2018 12:19:00 PM
I will try again.
Date: 6/4/2018 6:30:00 PM
Fortunate for you it was not spilled milk. I have heard that spilled milk leads to crying. I’m glad it led to a new outfit, great problem solving skills and a fun poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2018 8:36:00 AM
Hello Richard, how are you doing? I had no choice but to go on with my day. Thank you for your lovely comment.Have a nice day my frind.
Date: 6/4/2018 10:44:00 AM
lol...nicely done.. making a simple incident into a poem is not easy ..love yur style
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2018 11:18:00 AM
Hello Jim, thank you for your lovely comment.Your right it is not easy, it happened to me. So I wrote about it. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/4/2018 8:55:00 AM
That's why we spill our coffee...so we can buy new attire lol...lovely write my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2018 11:24:00 AM
Hello Winged Warrior, yes that is right. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/3/2018 12:14:00 PM
I can only imagine Darlene. I can relate to this, from spilling coffee on me often lol :)
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:29:00 AM
Hello Heidi, it was not pleasant for me. I ended up buying a new top on sale. It was the first time it happened to me. Have a nice day my friend.Thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 6/3/2018 5:04:00 AM
Nicely essayed! I remember this happening in a formal affair; terrible!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2018 9:47:00 AM
Hello Ashley Conte,it is nice to meet you. For me it was awful. I smelled like coffee all afternoon. I hope that never happens again. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/2/2018 10:01:00 PM
I hate it when that happens. I spill coffee all the time. It can be embarrassing at times. A good read:)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2018 9:50:00 AM
Hello Daniel, yes I do agree it can be embarrassing, it was for me. i smelled like coffee all afternoon. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/2/2018 8:13:00 PM
Darlene, a slice from life, I recall once dripping mustard on my top, fun write ~
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2018 9:51:00 AM
Hello Broken Wings,oh mustard is worse than coffee. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/2/2018 6:16:00 PM
A bit uncomfortable it was...tell me....what is a scorn...not familiar with it... A coffee spilled evening...Nice one...All the best Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2018 9:57:00 AM
Hello Micheal, a scorn is like a tea bbiscuit it is very good. I smelled like coffee all afternoon. thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

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