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How can a Tanka sound so perfect? Its beyond me! Hah! Well sorry I always spam your comment box, but I cant help it! Its not just the choice of words in your tanka, but the sound and cadence of your way with phrasing emotions, that makes even the stars palpitate and burn, and I love how seamless your alliterations in the last line are too! Your words leave me breathless! I know why I am in love with Poetry, when I read you, I remember why! 🌹 💎 🌹 🩵🌊🩵

I love your mention of garnet there, Poet Man! It’s my birthstone, in case you didn’t know. 🥹 Hmm, well, first of all, the title made me pause and go, “What?!!” Gosh, I felt my heart skip a million throbs! And how did you even think of: “Drip of melting wings, love echo cuts low pulse wide,” Wow! I am absolutely awe-struck, fan-girling over you, despite not fully understanding the concept of a “low pulse” and how it leads to a heart’s highs! Well, you need to enlighten me more, 🐦‍🔥...