Spiders Web

silent invisible needles and threads keep sowing and reaping my soul into death
i open my my eyes and i can't catch my breath...
suffocated and strangled...hellbound and hexed
seductions construction still building those lies...
hypnotized and held by magnetic eyes
i twist and i turn and i'm losing my strength...
trying to break free from the spiders web

like eggs of elation hatching lunatic lust
strong legs wrap around me...squeezing hard till i bust
with lips spewing lies and a tongue sharp that severs
i'm a slave to a master...a monster called more
she whips me and strips me of love,life,and light
i'm hooked like a junkie...like a fish on the line
she whispers sweet nothings and kills me with kisses...she hisses
i plunder her field too late to repent...
trying to break free from the spiders web

false facades they now fall to floors with no bottom
i see her smile in the mirror...
i paint the world black as i'm stricken with terror
her fangs they go deep to the depths of my soul
she laughs as i'm sucked in a giant black hole
her venom flows through me like strobe lights and subways
her face turns to fury,thunder and lightning
lost in her labrynth i'm a feast for the worms
she taking her time as my exsistance now burns
stretched into nothing my will power bends...
trying to break free from the spiders web

anthony_beesley@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/7/2010 12:21:00 PM
Hey Anthony: Powerful poem!!! It reminds me of a scene in the movie Lord Of The Rings, when Frodo is in battle with the giant spider (later Sam kicks it's butt). Thank you 4 reading my poem and commenting on it. Peace: Sheol
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:49:00 AM
Anthony:)enjoyed the depth of your poem. You sure have a manifeast with to reveal acertain love for your fate*luv~SKAT
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