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heaven sent crystals glistening on silken threads dawn is just breaking 28th August 2015

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Date: 11/21/2015 2:36:00 PM
A most fascinating image is a Spiders Web graced with natures droplets of champagne. This poem is a Gem, Jan ~~ xx ~~
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:22:00 PM
I am very proud of this one James - I did a talk on creative writing to our 6th formers last week and this is one of the poems I showed them:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2015 8:27:00 PM
Jan, hi. I unblock my mail for you. I hope to hear from you soon. I'd hate to leave it unblock all night. Would you please tell me what's on your mind. I'll be here another hour. Skat
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Date: 11/7/2015 4:25:00 AM
Replied - sorry the time difference is about 6 hours and I went to bed :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 11:43:00 AM
Love to see early morning webs. This makes a shimmering haiku, lovely~Delice
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:55:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Delice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2015 1:36:00 AM
Awesome
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Skat I was really pleased with the reaction I've had to this poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/2/2015 12:47:00 PM
Crisp as new day, everything of it is beautiful. Thanks for commenting on Friendship poem.
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Date: 9/2/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Iris:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2015 11:50:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
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Date: 8/30/2015 4:00:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by Kash:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/29/2015 6:47:00 PM
Nice use of the form - and you stuck to the 5 7 5 format - which is all to the good! Beautiful words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2015 5:12:00 PM
Jan, it's lovely imagery. and it's darn near as close to being haiku as I think it can be!! (you and I are obsessing on this now, what is haiku and what isn't it. haha. anyway, I think it is GREAT)
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:31:00 PM
Thanks so much I really do value your opinion Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/29/2015 2:09:00 PM
This is a lovely haiku, Jan. Webs do fascinate me, but then even some spiders do!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/29/2015 6:31:00 PM
Thanks Paul:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/29/2015 1:19:00 AM
LOL "The Web" I think you are trying to outdo even my humor!!!!! LOL
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Date: 8/29/2015 1:22:00 AM
That would be a challenge Arthur lol:-) Thankfully one of my few assets is a quick humour lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 8:59:00 PM
That photo goes so well this poem!!!!! Hugs
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Date: 8/29/2015 1:07:00 AM
Thats the wonder of the web lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 12:46:00 PM
You weave such extinct wonderful imagery through your poem that adds to the beauty of the whole. Emile.
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Date: 8/28/2015 5:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Emile:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 12:02:00 PM
This is so so lovely, dear Jan!! I loved it!! :D :D
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Date: 8/28/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Sneha - I don't like spiders but their webs are true works of art:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 9:39:00 AM
Divine! A seven dear, Jan!
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 8:37:00 AM
A superb haiku with the kind of end line one would expect from an original Japanese haiku! This one belongs in a book of how haikus should be written. Well done, Jan. / M
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:05:00 AM
Oh thank you so much Maurice I have had 2 of my haiku published in journals I never know if I have got the format correct:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 8:00:00 AM
240 years from now you will be like Jane Austen is today....truly remarkable!
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Date: 8/28/2015 8:06:00 AM
Oh Judy you are too kind .. I'm just happy I began writing and have discovered a creativity I never knew existed before my hubby got cancer - I will never be famous but oh boy I am having fun:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 5:06:00 AM
Magnificent. Great haiku!
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Njeri:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 4:23:00 AM
- It is a work of art !!! - Beautiful haiku, Jan !! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise I never know if i have got the haiku format right i just write and hope people like my words:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/28/2015 3:56:00 AM
hey you....I hate spiders, but this is a thing of beauty. You've written it so well, dear. Hugs
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:42:00 AM
Me too Eileen - we actually call them 'Doiders' as my son David could never say spider - it was 'Incy Wincy Doider' - I do love their webs though - I posted the poem - went through to the kitchen - their on the wall was a massive one (well big to me) and son wasn't around to remove it. I was very brave lol :-( Hugs Jan xx