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heaven sent crystals
glistening on silken threads 
dawn is just breaking

28th August 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2021 9:22:00 AM

Ahh!! That is a special time to see those spider webs glistening with dew or rain. A whole lot better than not seeing one and wearing it. LOL..Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2021 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win on Brian’s contest, you deserve it with this very well penned Haiku. My best regards.

Greg Gaul

Date: 6/8/2021 4:47:00 PM

Walked right into one of these yesterday morning in the woods. It was glorious.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 3:35:00 PM

An excellent haiku, Jan! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2021 1:41:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Jan. A spider's web of sparkling crystals at dawn is a just plain awesome delight. Congratulations! Hugs :D

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2015 2:36:00 PM

A most fascinating image is a Spiders Web graced with natures droplets of champagne. This poem is a Gem, Jan ~~ xx ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:22:00 PM

I am very proud of this one James - I did a talk on creative writing to our 6th formers last week and this is one of the poems I showed them:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2015 8:27:00 PM

Jan, hi. I unblock my mail for you. I hope to hear from you soon. I'd hate to leave it unblock all night. Would you please tell me what's on your mind. I'll be here another hour. Skat

Jan Allison
Date: 11/7/2015 4:25:00 AM

Replied - sorry the time difference is about 6 hours and I went to bed :-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/15/2015 11:43:00 AM

Love to see early morning webs. This makes a shimmering haiku, lovely~Delice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Delice:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 9/8/2015 1:36:00 AM

Awesome

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2015 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Skat I was really pleased with the reaction I've had to this poem:-) hugs jan xx

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 9/2/2015 12:47:00 PM

Crisp as new day, everything of it is beautiful. Thanks for commenting on Friendship poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/2/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Iris:-) hugs Jan xx

Kash Poet

Date: 8/29/2015 11:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2015 4:00:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by Kash:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/29/2015 6:47:00 PM

Nice use of the form - and you stuck to the 5 7 5 format - which is all to the good! Beautiful words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 6:49:00 PM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 5:12:00 PM

Jan, it's lovely imagery. and it's darn near as close to being haiku as I think it can be!! (you and I are obsessing on this now, what is haiku and what isn't it. haha. anyway, I think it is GREAT)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 6:31:00 PM

Thanks so much I really do value your opinion Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2015 2:09:00 PM

This is a lovely haiku, Jan. Webs do fascinate me, but then even some spiders do!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 6:31:00 PM

Thanks Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/29/2015 1:19:00 AM

LOL "The Web" I think you are trying to outdo even my humor!!!!! LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 1:22:00 AM

That would be a challenge Arthur lol:-) Thankfully one of my few assets is a quick humour lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2015 8:59:00 PM

That photo goes so well this poem!!!!! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thats the wonder of the web lol:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 12:46:00 PM

You weave such extinct wonderful imagery through your poem that adds to the beauty of the whole. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 5:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment Emile:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 8/28/2015 12:02:00 PM

This is so so lovely, dear Jan!! I loved it!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Sneha - I don't like spiders but their webs are true works of art:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2015 9:39:00 AM

Divine! A seven dear, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 9:46:00 AM

Thank you so much:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/28/2015 8:37:00 AM

A superb haiku with the kind of end line one would expect from an original Japanese haiku! This one belongs in a book of how haikus should be written. Well done, Jan. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 9:05:00 AM

Oh thank you so much Maurice I have had 2 of my haiku published in journals I never know if I have got the format correct:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/28/2015 8:00:00 AM

240 years from now you will be like Jane Austen is today....truly remarkable!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 8:06:00 AM

Oh Judy you are too kind .. I'm just happy I began writing and have discovered a creativity I never knew existed before my hubby got cancer - I will never be famous but oh boy I am having fun:-) Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/28/2015 5:06:00 AM

Magnificent. Great haiku!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thanks Njeri:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2015 4:23:00 AM

- It is a work of art !!! - Beautiful haiku, Jan !! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise I never know if i have got the haiku format right i just write and hope people like my words:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/28/2015 3:56:00 AM

hey you....I hate spiders, but this is a thing of beauty. You've written it so well, dear. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 6:42:00 AM

Me too Eileen - we actually call them 'Doiders' as my son David could never say spider - it was 'Incy Wincy Doider' - I do love their webs though - I posted the poem - went through to the kitchen - their on the wall was a massive one (well big to me) and son wasn't around to remove it. I was very brave lol :-( Hugs Jan xx

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