Spider Plant Verse 2

Thunder clouds at sunset.
A tiled mosaic. 

NB: Inspired by Suzanne Delaney’s contest and subsequent blog (3-29-2023). This form arose from the oral tradition of “call and response.” In the rhythm of their work and perhaps in the spirit of a game or to relieve boredom, people would call out to each other. The first speaker called out a line that contained an image. A second speaker replied using a second image. This second image was meant to function as an elaboration or metaphor of the first. No titles, no particular rhyme or syllabic scheme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:13 AM
This one is amazing, I can clearly picturise it:)
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 7:41 AM
I'm glad you can do so Jo. I'd hoped I had the image painted. :)
Lawless Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 10:31 AM
very nice imagery Linda..
Fowler Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 10:33 AM
Thank you John. I wasn't sure what to call it, but I used Suzanne's blog for info. I appreciate your stopping by! :)
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