Sphere

"Clarity Pyramid" SPHERE appears mentally celestial body visual projection of my imagination "With an inifinite radius" JP....6/06

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Date: 5/28/2010 10:31:00 PM

This is so unique as is all your work. I love it. Scarlett

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2009 11:31:00 AM

Very unusual write. That must be a very big celestial body. Keep writing. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/21/2009 11:37:00 AM

wonderful abstract yet real imagery! Light & Love

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/11/2009 9:43:00 PM

travelling in infinities breath ;) loved this one Jared .. congrates in being featured this week ..kind regards Jayne x x x

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/11/2009 5:53:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/8/2009 5:50:00 PM

Jared - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/8/2009 2:10:00 PM

Jared, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 9/7/2009 3:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Jared, must catch up on your work>>James

Date: 9/7/2009 12:18:00 PM

What an interesting view! Much for the reader to think about in this concise poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen