Sphere

"Clarity Pyramid"


SPHERE
appears
mentally

celestial body
visual projection
of my imagination

"With an inifinite radius"


JP....6/06

upliftingfree verse

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May 28, 2010 at 10:31 PM

This is so unique as is all your work. I love it. Scarlett

Sara Kendrick

October 10, 2009 at 11:31 AM

Very unusual write. That must be a very big celestial body. Keep writing. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

September 21, 2009 at 11:37 AM

wonderful abstract yet real imagery! Light & Love

Jayne Eggins

September 11, 2009 at 9:43 PM

travelling in infinities breath ;) loved this one Jared .. congrates in being featured this week ..kind regards Jayne x x x

Adeleke Adeite

September 11, 2009 at 5:53 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

Michael Jordan

September 8, 2009 at 5:50 PM

Jared - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj

Raul Moreno

September 8, 2009 at 2:10 PM

Jared, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

James Fraser

September 7, 2009 at 3:04 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Jared, must catch up on your work>>James

September 7, 2009 at 12:18 PM

What an interesting view! Much for the reader to think about in this concise poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen