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Speed Bump

She was on the rebound high on freedom's speed our coordinates collided in a silver speck of time we dumped our seeds upon a neon galaxie but nothing ever blooms on that starry autobahn I was just a speed bump, to her leather studded charm.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2019 2:48:00 PM

Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! It seems you also got top spot in the contest.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/27/2019 10:48:00 AM

Many congratulations to a unique poet. A perfect poem...it has universal appeal. Panagiota-))

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/24/2019 7:56:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Anthony. Love the imagery.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/22/2019 8:26:00 AM

I must say I was not surprised to see this was yours Anthony, a fan of your original poet's perspective and evocative use of language. Congratulations on your top win in my contest, and thank you. xomo

Anthony Biaanco
Date: 3/23/2019 5:54:00 AM

Hi Maureen, Thank you for running this type of contest, and for recognizing the importance of short forms of poetry, Best Wishes Anthony

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/17/2019 3:22:00 AM

Sad to think this, and yet it happens. I hope it did not happen, but the truth of it tells me it probably did. Sad.

Anthony Biaanco
Date: 3/22/2019 7:39:00 AM

Hi Caren, thanks for reading this poem...Yes it is a true story,but many years ago...I knew what I was getting into but smart and beautiful is so hard to resist. Best wishes, Anthony