Premiere Contest WinnerSpeed Bump

She was on the rebound
high on freedom's speed
our coordinates collided
in a silver speck of time. 

we dumped our seeds
upon a neon galaxy
but nothing ever blooms 
on that starry autobahn
I was just a speed bump,
to her leather studded charm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:48 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! It seems you also got top spot in the contest.
Romios Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 10:48 AM
Many congratulations to a unique poet. A perfect poem...it has universal appeal. Panagiota-))
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on your top win, Anthony. Love the imagery.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 8:26 AM
I must say I was not surprised to see this was yours Anthony, a fan of your original poet's perspective and evocative use of language. Congratulations on your top win in my contest, and thank you. xomo
Bianco Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 5:54 AM
Hi Maureen, Thank you for running this type of contest, and for recognizing the importance of short forms of poetry, Best Wishes Anthony
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:22 AM
Sad to think this, and yet it happens. I hope it did not happen, but the truth of it tells me it probably did. Sad.
Bianco Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Hi Caren, thanks for reading this poem...Yes it is a true story,but many years ago...I knew what I was getting into but smart and beautiful is so hard to resist. Best wishes, Anthony
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