Speechless

the look of silence
after your walls have fallen —
in full surrender
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 24, 2019 at 1:09 PM
This is not a good look for me... I well know it, however... Excellence in words, brief yet a mountain of meaning. Ann
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March 2, 2019 at 7:23 PM
wow, so expressive!! Congrats on your win.
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February 28, 2019 at 11:20 PM
Yes I still love this piece. I could not remember who's it was, I am not surprised ;) Congratulations on your win! xomo
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 10:36 PM
Poignant write. Congrats on your win, PM.
Kiser Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:33 AM
True and scary when those walls fall. Congrats on the win.
Gentry Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Back to congratulate you again on a top win. Well done!
Poteet Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Love your off the wall piece here, clever. Salutations on the thought and your placement - deserving of applause.
Talbot Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Super Magicicada, congratulations on your top spot! Mick
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June 15, 2018 at 7:51 PM
congrats on your win!
Lawless Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Well Done, congrats on the top spot...this one settled on me like melting ice...
Pett Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win P.M, great haiku. :))
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June 15, 2018 at 12:59 PM
- A beautiful haiku on top of the winning list :) - Congratulations, P.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:43 AM
This fabulous , P.M.Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~' *
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations for your top win! Excellent :)
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June 15, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your top placement in this contest! A haiku written in the style of the masters - Bravo! Hugs. Pandita
La France Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:43 AM
PM. congratulations on your placement with this beautifully penned Haiku, hope all is well with you. Constance
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June 15, 2018 at 8:31 AM
This was one of the easiest to judge P.M., an impacting affecting write, exactly what I was hoping for; first place with first read. Excellent piece! Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo
Marc Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:56 PM
A sincere thank you to Maureen and everyone who commented :)
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 1:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. Profound and thought provoking... I like it.
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Lovely haiku, P.M. - your gem leave the reader wanting to take a moment to let it sink in so to appreciate. Congrats on your most deserved podium finish.
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