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fog furtively moves covering crusty damp earth till sluggish sun soars. Copyright © 2010

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Date: 8/11/2013 3:44:00 PM
second time to see this one. STill loving the alliteration. well, I better move on. Lots to do yet this afternoon!
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Date: 2/22/2010 12:41:00 PM
very descriptive... nice...
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Caryl. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:23:00 AM
Interesting ideas here in this one that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 8:49:00 PM
AWESOME, I like how you kind of took that eerie path same as I did. I couldn't tell if the sun was setting or rising, so I kept it eerie by making the night coming!! LUv, Andrea
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