Spectator

the hour late, I hesitate
to lift the shield of isolation
the walls lean in, as if to hear
they make believe, by breathing hard,
as if they sleep,  
but I am wise to them, I am...

I know the sound, I know of eyes...
these walls have souls that live within
the air is solid, the light is dim
beyond my window, summer stirs
a sleuth that leers... , absurd it seems,
but watching me, I feel the burn

it shuffles in, with shades of black
a muffled step, through restless leaves
I catch my breath, ......yet strange, ....at ease 
the curtain pants, with pulsing veins
I brush my hair, step out of clothes...
wait one moment to compose...
slip on a gown, 
holding close my other self
the one who never dares to take a chance
I want to dance the seven veils,
for eyes that dwell beyond the glass
beyond my dream,  ....they look at me

two eyes,they watch in black and white,
I feel the burning of the night
the suddenness of who I am...
she has no name
she has no shame 
wanton, willing in the dark
it's sliding in the crisp black grass
I douse the light.........and step up close
to look again, through window's pane
no questions asked

the eyes aren't there.....
in black and white.......and by the gate...
nothing waits....

becoming clear
but I don't care......
in isolation............the walls are falling
and have old souls

I know they stare
I'll dance for them
I know for certain
they are there
 


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Resubmitted for Contest: Premiere Contest # 10
Sponsored by Skat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arnone Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Rhythm and rhyme so cool and chilling. Very good write, Carrie.
A  Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
Puddifoot Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 7:13 AM
this is superb, carrie, and totally deserving of 1st place...very well written and atmospheric, with some wonderful lines such as "summer stirs/a sleuth that leers" and "the curtain pants"...you're just a born poet, a natural, you have that special something that can't be taught; what more is there to say? except...congrats! :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Unclear? and isn't that how a damned one would feel? unclear/conflicted! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:59 AM
wow well worth first place Carrie dark and eerie xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:21 PM
You ROCK, Carrie. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Rodgers Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Delightful, just keep dancin. Congrats on your win
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, carrie
Dom Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:07 AM
This write drew me in from the title, like Dracula's hynotic stare...Cheers for your glory!
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 1:58 AM
This is quite original ... and the atmosphere so perfectly created. Works for me :) congrats on a worthy win. // paul
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations on this awesome poem well deserving of top spot. Jan x
Walker  Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Nice Carrie... Congratulations on your first place win in the contest... Verlena
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Impressive poetry.
Nchindo Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 2:07 AM
Hard to understand, only after reading the last verse. great poem, great pontetial. I wonder how you pulled this one out. I am impressed!!! S.T
Devnath  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 1:10 PM
It's an interesting poem, enjoyed. Loved always, bl
Cayton Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 12:09 PM
well written Carrie, Cindy aka Lucinda ~ take care and God bless ya!
Gwynne-Galfe Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Very good work!
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 9:17 PM
wow, this is so surreal. Not sure I got it, but I sure enjoyed the read. It was a ghost story? I think John is gonna LOVE this.
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