Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Special Memories

Anniversaries, birthdays, special occasions

marking significant moments in our lives

bringing back precious feelings

reliving a once upon a time.

The first time that I met you

the butterflies I had inside

sitting in that corner café

daydreaming you were my bride

The candlelit dinner for two

outdoors under a red streaked sky

when I got down on my knee

oh that gleam I saw in your eye

Telling your mum she'd be a grandma

in her garden overlooking the sea

the day you made me a daddy

oh what a happy day it was for me

First feelings, first moments, first memories

 first kisses, first dates, first times

Anniversaries, birthdays, special occasions

celebrating that day you became mine

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Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2016 at 1:43 AM Tim, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA

A. Juman November 8, 2015 at 11:46 AM First place very nice. please do check out mines too

Michael Tor October 23, 2015 at 2:52 AM Tim belated congrats.

Danielle Fenske October 21, 2015 at 8:04 AM So sweet....

Wendy Rycroft October 18, 2015 at 5:19 PM Very lovely xxxx wendy

Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2015 at 10:43 AM A belated congrats Tim!

Tim Smith October 17, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thank everyone for the well wishes they meant a lot and thanks TPS for the honor.

Kp Nunez October 17, 2015 at 5:22 AM A sweet nostalgic write. Love the easy way this one is read, Tim. Congrats on your POTD!

Eve Roper October 17, 2015 at 12:20 AM What a beautiful sentimental write, Tim. Congratulations on Poem of the day !

Alexis Y. October 16, 2015 at 7:29 PM Tim, congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paul Callus October 16, 2015 at 1:27 PM Some memories will always remain fresh in our minds, Tim. A delightful poem. Congrats on POTD honour! // paul

Miraj Raha October 16, 2015 at 1:07 PM Excellently tender poem Tim,congrats on POTD.

Casarah Nance October 16, 2015 at 12:52 PM Bringing out the warm fuzzy feeling for a poem of the day, grats to you tim, keep them happy memories close.

Eileen Manassian October 16, 2015 at 11:20 AM AWWWWwWWWwWWWWW.....this that tell you how sweet this is? You do ROMANCE so WELL! Congrats on POTD, dear.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 16, 2015 at 8:29 AM Beautiful Tim, Kudos!!! heartwarming sweet! =`)~Olive Eloisa

Neva Romaine October 16, 2015 at 8:21 AM Hey Tim, a hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTD!! Excellent expression and tribute to your warm and heartfelt memories. Be Blessed, Neva

Lin Lane October 16, 2015 at 7:55 AM Well written, Tim. A great choice for P O T D. Your memories are beautifully framed in this poem. Thank you for sharing them. ~ Lin ~

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 7:38 AM - A lovely poem, Tim :) - A pleasure to find it here on p.o.t.d. - Congratulations ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet October 15, 2015 at 10:53 AM A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of magic moments. Emile.

Charmaine Chircop October 15, 2015 at 8:48 AM life' s calendar is special to celebrate,..especially when the dates we toast to are of the loved ones in our life.So beautiful ! A fave.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 15, 2015 at 6:59 AM Moments like that are what make life desirable to live, dear Tim! Very tender and romantic poem that captures life's joy! A seven my friend!

Michael Tor October 15, 2015 at 1:44 AM Tim loving memories written here. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing...

Connie Marcum Wong October 14, 2015 at 8:14 PM A fellow with a sensitive and loving heart Tim, is what I see when I read this endearing poem about love, family and appreciation for all. It is beautiful my friend. Kudos! #7

Jan Allison October 14, 2015 at 4:59 PM Charming write Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer October 14, 2015 at 4:45 PM this is very charming, tim! i enjoyed it...