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Spears of Death

NARWHAL

Spares of Death

Fear.
Eyes tightly closed,
I am singing me a lullaby.
Fall Asleep, 
I tell myself.
Fall asleep,
lest one of these lighting rods of ugliness 
plunge it's terror into my heart.
Like angels of death they snorkels around me.
It's a dolphin!
No, it's a whale!
It's a massive ugly creature.
with a spear of death in its head.
Ugly!
Beautiful!
Awesome!
The huge oceans!
Indeed the fittest place 
for these contradictory pods of terror.

10/1/2015 © A & J Juman The "Said" Poet

fearfishoceanLullabyfree verse

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Marion Mwangi

November 20, 2015 at 7:28 AM

another greeat one

Joel Thornton

November 9, 2015 at 8:17 PM

Very impressed 07 for me thank you for sharing thank your son for allowing you to share again very impressed and a great pen keep writing and I'm sure to check out more of your work

A. Juman

November 9, 2015 at 8:59 PM

Thank you Joel --I should be getting another one within the week. I be sure to let you know when I get it and like always thank you

Lewis Nyaga

November 7, 2015 at 4:03 AM

A. Zaladin.. an intriguing piece you have penned here.. had to reread it A 7 Definitely//blessings

A. Juman

November 7, 2015 at 8:25 AM

Thanks a million --Lewis I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder

John Lawless

November 6, 2015 at 8:59 PM

uniquely twisted take on the Narwhal theme.

A. Juman

November 6, 2015 at 11:14 PM

Thanks a million --John I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder

Rudolph Rinaldi

November 6, 2015 at 8:30 PM

Like all your poems , interesting, very observant and thoughtful.

A. Juman

November 6, 2015 at 11:13 PM

Thanks a million --Rudolph I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder

Marcela Villar M

November 5, 2015 at 7:07 PM

This is a well written work, A. Zaladin. It has several interesting elements, good imagery and voices. Well done.

A. Juman

November 5, 2015 at 7:40 PM

thank you for reading --I do appreciate

Skat A

October 20, 2015 at 11:24 AM

Hi, A. Zaladin, when will you have a new poem? Just wondering... SKAT

Skat A

October 26, 2015 at 5:09 PM

LOL, you have to admire your son. SKAT

A. Juman

October 20, 2015 at 11:56 AM

I have a few that I wrote last week but the boss has to edit them then my son has to decide it he will allow me to use it and he is the hard one. According to him it don't matter if I wrote it 30 years ago or its yet to be written it is his. He is 15 and very self assured. I told him when he goes to college next year I'll be free again after 15 years, he told me to keep dreaming

Dalia Shahein

October 19, 2015 at 6:59 PM

I'm captured by ur poem my friend, very lovely beautiful and creative....Good one I really enjoyed reading it.... :)

A. Juman

October 19, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Thanks much DALIA-- Like you like that--Gives me the incentive to do better

Skat A

October 13, 2015 at 1:43 PM

I'm just passing by, oOo I love what I just read. SKAT

A. Juman

October 13, 2015 at 5:38 PM

Thanks much SKAT - like you like that

Afolabi Muideen

October 13, 2015 at 3:41 AM

I dropped by to review your excellently write, it seduced me voluptuously.....well done dear poet. I hope you would drop by my page to re-read that poem GLORY thanks for your pleasant words..........A.M