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Spears of Death

NARWHAL Spares of Death Fear. Eyes tightly closed, I am singing me a lullaby. Fall Asleep, I tell myself. Fall asleep, lest one of these lighting rods of ugliness plunge it's terror into my heart. Like angels of death they snorkels around me. It's a dolphin! No, it's a whale! It's a massive ugly creature. with a spear of death in its head. Ugly! Beautiful! Awesome! The huge oceans! Indeed the fittest place for these contradictory pods of terror. 10/1/2015 © A & J Juman The "Said" Poet

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Date: 11/20/2015 7:28:00 AM
another greeat one
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:17:00 PM
Very impressed 07 for me thank you for sharing thank your son for allowing you to share again very impressed and a great pen keep writing and I'm sure to check out more of your work
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you Joel --I should be getting another one within the week. I be sure to let you know when I get it and like always thank you
Date: 11/7/2015 4:03:00 AM
A. Zaladin.. an intriguing piece you have penned here.. had to reread it A 7 Definitely//blessings
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thanks a million --Lewis I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder
Date: 11/6/2015 8:59:00 PM
uniquely twisted take on the Narwhal theme.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thanks a million --John I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder
Date: 11/6/2015 8:30:00 PM
Like all your poems , interesting, very observant and thoughtful.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thanks a million --Rudolph I really do appreciate that very much thanks again I do try my best. Your words gives me more incentive to try harder
Date: 11/5/2015 7:07:00 PM
This is a well written work, A. Zaladin. It has several interesting elements, good imagery and voices. Well done.
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A. Juman
Date: 11/5/2015 7:40:00 PM
thank you for reading --I do appreciate
Date: 10/20/2015 11:24:00 AM
Hi, A. Zaladin, when will you have a new poem? Just wondering... SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 5:09:00 PM
LOL, you have to admire your son. SKAT
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Date: 10/20/2015 11:56:00 AM
I have a few that I wrote last week but the boss has to edit them then my son has to decide it he will allow me to use it and he is the hard one. According to him it don't matter if I wrote it 30 years ago or its yet to be written it is his. He is 15 and very self assured. I told him when he goes to college next year I'll be free again after 15 years, he told me to keep dreaming
Date: 10/19/2015 6:59:00 PM
I'm captured by ur poem my friend, very lovely beautiful and creative....Good one I really enjoyed reading it.... :)
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Date: 10/19/2015 8:41:00 PM
Thanks much DALIA-- Like you like that--Gives me the incentive to do better
Date: 10/13/2015 1:43:00 PM
I'm just passing by, oOo I love what I just read. SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2015 5:38:00 PM
Thanks much SKAT - like you like that
Date: 10/13/2015 3:41:00 AM
I dropped by to review your excellently write, it seduced me voluptuously.....well done dear poet. I hope you would drop by my page to re-read that poem GLORY thanks for your pleasant words..........A.M
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Date: 10/7/2015 7:41:00 PM
What a great write this is.....wow! I love how is was constructed beautiful and very excellent.......A.M.
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:40:00 AM
Hi there --Thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate thanks
Date: 10/2/2015 11:02:00 PM
Wow creatively used the narwhal in metaphor.! A gret poem u crafted in sublime muse ansd comparisons. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:19:00 PM
Zaynub -Thanks a million I did reply but in the wrong place please forgive me